Another small test I did

Sup , this is just another small test I did .
Some walking and a REALLY weak punch

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/328cfd29a7fb88c095f70709cd0ece86

Any feedback for this one ? im currently working on a full scene much more complete than this one .

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i cant open it

 

you need flash to open it and you need to accept the site to use flash player to view the animation

 

http://maplemation.com/threads/the-dumpster-post-your-tests-and-super-short-anims-here.31217/ Thought I told you small tests go here.

Anyways, not much to say. The text is a bit too small and plain. You may want to just throw some filter on there, like a red glow with a white text color. The punch itself seems not exaggerated enough. The body is still and the other arm doesn't show any sign of the punching arm, so you may want to study that concept. It would compliment some stuff you're doing.

 

Spoiler: this is what happen

http://imgur.com/a/NiFGJ

 

http://www.fastswf.com/DxtSOnw :V If this doesn't work, then it's more of a problem on your end, and you may want to double check your Flash player.

 

now i can open it, thank you shulkle

 

sorry , my fault

 

Was it a punch?

 

yeah ... I tried to do it faster but ... yeah ;/