Animation Psy's MBR Profile

Discussion in 'MBR Profiles' started by PsyMatter, Aug 20, 2019.

  1. PsyMatter

    PsyMatter The Maple That's Psychic

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    Hitlist: Azurector, Mr. Riklemouse.
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    MBR vs Alex303 (Loss -50 | 24>0)
    MBR vs Leon (Loss -30 | 0>0)
     
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  2. Mr.Riklemouse

    Mr.Riklemouse Yo, I'm a... an animator who searching peace

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    Interesting !:coolguy:
     
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  3. Nineb

    Nineb YEET

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    Interesting !:coolguy:
     
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    Azurector Thief.

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  5. Neil

    Neil "Oops"
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    There's barely any animation to really see here. It's either a lot of darting around or really blurred poses and with the animation that IS here, it's constantly pausing after a combo which just kills your flow. That and there's a lack of sound effects and regular effects as well.(the only thing there are hits and nothing else, you'd want to add some more whooshes).
    Having only this to work with really hurts your score, but it does give me an idea of what you can fix. First off, be wary of the amount of pauses in your animations and how long each one is, like the ones at 0:10 - 0:11 and 0:12 - 0:15. If you got rid of those, it would help a lot. Your camming is also something that wasn't that outstanding as it was mostly still with some slow pans/zoom and nothing more. It wasn't really following anything in particular, it was just there.
    You should try making something a little longer next time so we can grade you more accurately.
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