Realm [Chapter 1] Unfinished ;c

Discussion in 'Animations' started by Aerocobe, Jan 1, 2017.

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Continue it?

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  2. Sure, why not?

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  1. Aerocobe

    Aerocobe Newbie

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    Heyy guys! i was working on this project with a friend, but i think he died, not sure where he went... I really wanted to finish this first chapter, but i kinda lost motivation for it ;/. Yeah, yeah i know, same ol' excuse, but tell me how you guys think about the animation. Cnc would be greatly appreciated!
    http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/9e53f1a0d5f387ecb8612c474d4ec4d2
     
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  2. NobleJuice

    NobleJuice Wandering Wizard

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    And you just look at her crying.
    So insensetive.
     
  3. Bryant

    Bryant Fireworks Animator

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    Did you quit because you couldn't find a girl voice actor or......? :D

    Not really much to CNC. Voice acting could use a little more enthusiasm in some parts. Other than that, everything was solid.
     
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  4. Aerocobe

    Aerocobe Newbie

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    Pshh.... no.... ;c. And also he's a downer, so his voice is kinda mono toned.
     
  5. Dally

    Dally Watcher of the Land
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    Perhaps to show some of his "downer debby" personality are some small cynicisms in his dialog. It would also be nice for the map to be separated into background and foreground parts, and have some parallax in them. Other than that, I love the body movements here! :)
     
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