My MBR due date is today and my opponent decided to quit :/ So here is what I got. Here was the theme and stuff he challenged me with: "Let's mbr dude theme: none maple free style max time: 20-50 sec due date: 10 days"
'Twas enjoyable. Although the trail effect at 0:25 was poorly executed, and it ended with smoke that looked like it was drawn by a toddler. Everything else was decent. Too bad you couldn't finish it.
Spoiler -Why is the camera so zoomed in throughout the entire animation? -...Why did you bother with this? What exactly were you trying to do? The camera was so zoomed in so nobody could see his legs, hell, they could barely see his hand when he pointed at IronMan. -Also, what's with the jerky arm movement in the beginning? Did you just forget to add easing to it or something? I don't really want to repeat what I just said, but people won't be able to catch Captain America pointing since the camera is so zoomed in. -0:19 completely killed whatever flow there was with that 3s of useless text and wouldn't IronMan be able to react fast enough to dodge Captain Americas attack? It wasn't super fast or anything, so why didn't he just move out of the way? -With the perspective shot, I couldn't really tell what happened the first time I watched this and after 2 other times, I finally noticed that IronMan was hit with that shield. But...why didn't you do anything else with that? It seemed like a waste if you ask me, you could have done so much more with Captain America's shield yet it didn't even show up after that. -That ending...ugh. Didn't really comment on everything, but I'm sure this is enough for me to say, "You don't deserve the point in my eyes."
Took me a bit but I had to vote for no. It felt a lot more disappointing for reasons mentioned above. It's a shame you didn't get the fight you were going in for. Good luck on your next one man!
I will update your profile soon. Oh and please leave a link to your profile next time you MBR somebody.
