DBX Audition

Discussion in 'Animations' started by Min, Jan 18, 2018.

  1. Min

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    I made it in.
     
    #1 Min, Jan 18, 2018
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    Nice stuff man! Love the energy and pacing throughout, tho I would suggest maybe using a better 2-D background as it's hard to tell where the surface of the ground begins and ends whenever the characters stand up or fall back.

    Some of the camera-eye coordination is weird like when the guy goes "It's showtime!" and the attack goes right at the camera, then comes from the left. A little confusing in terms of POV, but nevertheless pretty bold use of visual dynamics. Good luck getting in! And if you do, I hope for your sake ScrewAttack's management improved and no longer abuses their employees D:
     
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    Thanks! I actually did make it in, thanks for the CnC!
     
    #3 Min, Jan 19, 2018
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    Oh wow, CONGRATZ! Can't wait to see your work in DBX :D
     
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