When I boring, I like to make a animation. And I made a animation at last weekend. It's about saving a animal, and that animal was following me. That was so cute.>< Here is my video, and enjoy it.
This looks good, sin(no)/cos(no)! - I love Deemo. Wings of Piano in particular is one of my favorites. It fits your snowy night theme quite well, but it doesn't really work with the fighting. - The jump/spin thing at 0:9-ish looks a bit off, though I can't tell you why. You'd want to speak to someone more familiar with fights on that. - Your facial expressions are great! I wonder if you could have played around with the animal's facial expressions around 0:58, though. Even just tilting its head or moving its irises to look at your character would have added something. - There are a lot of long pauses, like at 0:27, 0:33, and 0:58. I don't personally think these really add much. If anything, they make the viewer pause and wonder why it's so still. The pause at 0:45, however, was really great! You synced it with the music well. I loved it! I'm really happy to see more from you. Overall, I really like this! Please keep making and posting more :D <3
Thank you>< I will take your advice to do more practice. Really really thank you(sorry I so excited.)
Purpose is kinda meh, You hurt/kill other animals just to save one life. Those wolfs hunts for food in the winter to keep up with their daily diet, And you just messed up the nature food chain. Just becasue the animal look cute/non-hostile doesn't make them less belonging to the wild. I feel like you slow-motion too much, You should utilize it as an approach/intro or as a quicktime action in a clutch moment that viewer can't catch up. For the final attack It's ok but the action seem to be too short for that. And don't use it on every single action like jesus, It took over 50% of your action scene. Anyway for sony vegas user, I think it's 5.5/10.
Thank you point out my shortcomings. I will do better after this animation. And that point...I'll take it.
