Name: MexoKaton, Mexo CIVIL WAR | TEAM NEIL Bronze | 0 MBR Demo(s): Current Rank-Points: Character Biographies (Optional): Yune (SS in progress, 20% complete): Yune, despite their looks, is a female warrior from another realm. a permanent fusion between a prince of darkness and princess of light who come from said realm. unlike all the other know mexo's in the universe, yune (while being classified as a 'mexo') has her own timeline which doesn't connect to any other mexo's. her main mission is to defeat the evil Mechanaza who threatens to destroy all ALTER (Alternative Living Timeline Energy Realms) and make it so that there is only one perfect utopia of an ALTER. Yune's powers include: the abilites of light, the abilites of darkness, and flight. her main weapon is a sword forged from her own energy known as "Heavens Gate", and whenever she needs to she can dual wield her weapon and the prince of darks weapon which is know as "Hell's Torment". Koki (SS in progress, 50% complete): Koki is a female with a past she prefers not to talk about. a 90% human and 10% wolf hybrid who lives on the outskirts of the maple city. She, at the age of 10 along with other kids, was taken by scientists after they brainwashed her parents. she was tormented, humiliated, beaten, hurt, and experimented on for 18 years straight. during that time she gained wolf ears and her current powers thanks to all the experiments. she eventually broke out of the laboratory after destroying it with some fellow allies, but had missed so much of the worlds progression that she couldn't get used to the changes, and decided to watch from afar. she hates having to make physical contact with people due to the factor being that she has...hunger issues. whenever she gets hungry, her primal instincts kick in and she thinks about eating and consuming any type of flesh in the area, if someone so much as pokes her they could lose a hand in an instant because of her hunger (depending on how long she's gone without eating). her powers include: Telekinesis (pink eye) and Self Healing (green eye), her healing has limits such as the fact that she can't always heal herself. she only heals herself whenever there is a big wound, and that can take from 8 minutes to 30 minutes total, the cooldown being a total of 1 hour. if she forceably and rapidly heals herself she'll end up having to wait a full 24 hours before she can heal again. her weapons include a shield, a sword, and a yo-yo. each one can be formed from her scarf and each one has it's limitations. her shield is the weakest and can be gone in three strong hits or one super powered hit, it takes the least amount of energy to make and use. the sword is the second strongest, and can be swapped to mid shield, it takes a lot more energy to make and use and can break after a few hits (few being 5 to 7 hits, depending on how much energy she has). lastly is the yo-yo which is so powerful that it takes up so much energy to make and use, her powers are increased when the yo-yo is out and she is able to deal some deadly combos and killmoves, though it does leave her vulnerable and ends once a full combo or kill move has been used. (these are the two characters who will be used in MBR'S.) Hitlist (Optional): (coming when i'm confident enough to show it) Availability: If i say i'm available, we can mbr Season Record (Season 1): End of Season Rank-Points: Season High Rank-Points: Battle Record: VS VuvuCue (Lose 30 | 18>0)
First and foremost, I'd like to preface this by saying that my dm's are open and please let me or the animation team know if you want help via tutorials or just general feedback. We are here to help anyone and that includes you. Be sure to click the blue text for hyperlinked examples! I'm mainly gonna use your Maple Limitless part as examples because they showcase it best - but this is constant throughout all your animations. You've got a decent footing on Flash and how it works mechanically, but I think you should rewatch and animate alongside Derek's tutorials to get a better idea on how to get your fundamentals right. Your story and set-ups are interesting, but you spend some time on this as shown in Trystin vs Mexo. You have a lot of plot with all this build up that doesn't really pay off, so I would try to better balance the two in length. This causes the pacing to slow down (which is really important to fights) where some shots last for too long, like here. Your camera work is static or moves in short and simple tweens, it would make the animation a lot more exciting if you just moved it around more with tweens, shakes, etc. @Neil covered how to do camera shakes in his VoD review here! Your fluidity and understanding of physics needs some work, this is mainly because you don't use easing that much - doing some basic easing would make these look a lot better - check Derek's tutorial on sliding for more information Because of the lack of easing, sometimes your jumps look really rigid. Nested tweens really help jumps look more natural. Once again @Neil covered how to do this really easily on his VoD review. Your perspectives and maps look a bit off here. The ground has some clear splits and the perspective is at the wrong angle and also is the wrong texture - being dirt instead of grass. My advice here is to leave perspectives alone and focus on the basic fundamentals - this will make stuff like perspectives a lot easier. If you really want to know how to do it though, feel free to clarify to a member of the animation team. Your poses, in general, aren't aligned properly, by zooming in you can better align it - like how her feet slide about when doing an idle. Your rank is Bronze | 18 You've just gotten started so don't let this put you down too much if you are upset about your rank or would want help, as I stated at the beginning, the animation team will welcome you with open arms and try our best in assisting you in your endeavors for improvement. VoD reviews are a good way to get feedback in an easy way if you don’t like CNC paragraphs, so try it out here. Your issues are just basic fundamental issues that can be fixed very easily with feedback and time. Good luck on the grind!
Hey dude i have somethin' for ya : MBR Sub-Theme: Freestyle Due Date: 26/07/19 Time Limits: A minimum of 25 seconds and a maximum of 30 seconds I hope you are up for this one >:) (To contact me : Zeruma!#4804 (On discord) )
Hey Zeruma. For the time being I'm gonna have to hold onto it as I have to go back to school in a week, not to mention that I'm currently in Texas without my computer so yeah. When I get the chance, maybe next week maybe not I'll MBR you.
