Worked on this with many pauses. It turned out pretty well in my opinion. Tell me what you think! Spoiler
The style is cool and the colors are nice. But some critique tho, the arm, shoulder to chest proportion are a little weird, the upper arm looks too long, the shoulder too stiff for someone who has their hand resting in a pocket and the underarm has a weird anatomy. The really weird thing is the way she is holding the phone, she doesn't have the thumb on the screen and the other hand is in the pocket, so it doesn't look like she is using it, even if she is just resting her thumb, the phone would fall off once she touches it. Also she isn't even looking at it from that angle. It would make sense in a scene where she took the phone from a kid to bully it, but i have to use too much imagination for that. just git gud with hands.