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Discussion in 'Sprites' started by Mr.Bk, Dec 14, 2016.

  1. Mr.Bk

    Mr.Bk I still exist
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    btw: its been ages since i received a cnc on my stuff..
    just saying because i appreciate critiques and they really help me improve :)
     
  2. NobleJuice

    NobleJuice Wandering Wizard

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    She's shoving it deep inside.

    GJ LAD
     
  3. Taki

    Taki Delete me
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    She becomes flat when turning around, keep the head round in all angles.

    I can see you becoming more and more a paul robertson.
     
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  4. SuperKimxD

    SuperKimxD Space Case
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    Cute!
    I'm with T aki here. The only thing that strikes me as off is her turn. Aside from that, I don't think that's really how hair works, referring to the last part.
    If you work on this any more, I'd love to see more of it! :D
     
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  5. CCshinobi

    CCshinobi Filmmaker, Animator
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    Lovely detail with the eye and hair movement. Aside from the turn, this is neat enough to be in one of those quality indie pixel games (though seeing something actually come out of the weapon would be nice so it doesn't look like...something else lmao).
     
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  6. Mr.Bk

    Mr.Bk I still exist
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    XD ill keep that in mind for my next sprites