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Discussion in 'Comics' started by TWS, Feb 1, 2016.
Made this for a Friend On DeviantArt
No reaction against a threat? hardcore man.
Spoiler: HARDCORE CNC(GONE SEXUAL), PRESS AT YOUR OWN RISK
First of all, Never EVER EVER save a sprite comic in .JPEG format.
It makes it lose all of its quality and creates extra pixels that makes the comic look blurry
If it was not saved as a .JPEG file, then idk what you did.
Just, dont make it blurry.
^ JPEG FORMAT
As you can see the JPEG comic is blurrier than the PNG comic. The PNG is brighter and has a better quality.
V PNG FORMAT
Secondly please think of how you place your speech bubbles. Damn I got confused of how to read this comic
since you placed the speech bubbles so weird.
I thought for a second that I was reading a goddamn manga, cause I was reading right to left at the beginning
but then I had to read left to right in the end.
Also put speech tails to your bubbles so I know who is talking to who.
It looks very clear who is talking in this comic, but I'd recommend you to use it since it looks wayyyyy better.
Lastly your comic looks so boring. Just a guy standing and a girl sitting without even changing a slight facial expression?
Try to make different panels so there's a lot of more action going on. They can have a conversation, but no one wants to see
your characters standing in the same spot for 3 panels with the same panel shot.
Be creative! Try make a close up panel when the girl (or guy idk) threatens him and then the next panel the blue guy can
just answer casually with the K.
Feels more alive than just 3 same panel shots of them talking in the same positions.
So obviously you read it right to left downward (ya fuckin weeb trash).
>"So... I heard ya like anime, huh?"
>"Yeah. So what?"
>"Gore, Horror, and Yaoi stuff."
>"You are one sick motherfucker, ya know that right?"
SO... following the logic stated above, Panel 3 would be read like this:
>"I got a taser with me, I recommend you to shut up."
wat. All of a sudden Panel 3 is read left to right.
Oh shet...I didn't even notice that
Yes I know, I'm very sorry for the dissapointment, I'll be sure to do the right thing, and also take a note of this, before I forget about it.
I apologize for my mistake, and Thank you for informing me.
I ike his face is so calm to know she has a taser that guy is calmer than the still water
Panelling needs work, it just looks like an album of images chucked together, take note from zemmi's post there and see how the panels are actual panels.
Uh, speech bubbles should be placed top to bottom in order of happening.
It's pretty boring as well, following zemmi's CnC, but idk if you're gonna further this.
No worries, i don't think i'll ost Comics here anyway...But i'll take note of it. and Post a good one someday