ANOTHER RAP/somthing BY HAN5EL (5-H-S)

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  1. 5-H-S

    5-H-S Veteran Membah'

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    BRAH.
    JUST OPEN DA SPILLER.

    UH,​
    YEAH, BOUT TO HIT YOU WITH SOME NEW BARS. ​
    M.M NAME CHANGED, BLUE GLOW BUT NO STAR, ​
    YEEAH, I HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN FAR. ​
    ALL CAPS, UPDATE, WORKING ON MY M-B-R’s.​

    new name, 5-H-S​
    i'm a mess.
    but i got some bars nonetheless,
    now please just read the rest

    New speed.

    Just another rap by Han "5" e-l
    making people laugh like l-e-l
    absorbing u like cell,
    round two,
    ring the bell,
    I'm going in deep, I'm the black sheep
    and i know it's really hell

    On Earth.

    D-B-Z Cell,
    man
    all I seek is perfection
    a power level boost,
    super mega erections.

    Pokemon.

    Use "Roost",
    Dat HP boost
    "Brave Bird"
    K.O,
    My wings are set loose

    What a niu
    sance,

    That conformity.
    it’s destroying in the masses
    and enormity
    nothing much you can do
    but leave formally.

    Anti-social’s what they call us
    but we’re just really far from it.
    Prick
    so go plummet
    to that society,
    with all the impropriety

    dude, you're sticking to them like glue
    just conform like you always do
    just don’t plan to bring me along too
    Can't you see, I obviously
    got other better things to do?

    See
    all these bad intentions causing major tension
    leading to killings and infections.
    i’m kind of sick of it all so i’m going back to
    the sprite section

    MM

    My new name’s, 5-H-S, art name,
    i'm a mess
    but i got some bars nonetheless.
    and so, you’ve heard the rest
    p.s,
    i wish you the best






    COMMENT N CRITICISM ACCEPTED. (I was bored.)
     
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  2. Trashbag

    Trashbag Animati-

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    Hail naw son, you needa work on your bars it would proby sound better if you recorded it I hate reading rap
    I died at "WORKING ON MY M-B-R’s."
     
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  3. RavenZecrow

    RavenZecrow The Phantom Assassin

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    Had me cracking up at times, specially at the "mega erections" part lol. Though, your flow needs work and ya gotta come harder with them punch lines bro, I would spit some bars at you but ya know...not trying to up shine you or anything.
     
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