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Art MBR: Clev vs Her

Discussion in 'Art Arena' started by Cleventine, Feb 17, 2015.

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  1. Her

    12 vote(s)
    70.6%
  2. Clev

    5 vote(s)
    29.4%
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  1. Cleventine

    Cleventine More dead than this fourm

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  2. Lynus

    Lynus R.I.P Reginald.
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    Holy fuck.
    I looked at Her's in disgust at first and I said to myself JPEG but I saved the image and holy fucking shit.
    Woah fuck me.

    Sorry Clev, but Her takes it from me !
     
  3. Min

    Min I hate TheWind
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    omg that ign

    As I usually like Clev's drawing style, this time it just looked hastily done, like you were under pressure. Correct me if I'm wrong on that, but compared to Her's, the amount of work that was put into it didn't seem ample. I still like Clev's style tho.

    I guess I'm going with Her's for more work and quality.
     
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  4. Blacksmith

    Blacksmith N E G R O I D
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    Cleevvyyyy, im sorry if im wrong but dont rush things

    it still looks good but it seems a bit too rushed and stuff


    and when it came to her's like i had the same case as lynus

    qnq
     
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    Trowicia Querulous Quidnunc
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    Both are very creative in their own respective ways. Submitted my vote.
     
  6. Nameomn

    Nameomn Sword Combat Specialist

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    my vote go to "her"
    because it's look very detaily, also shadow quality is better than clev
     
  7. LeoV

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    her:
    the hatching is fun here (then again i LOOOOVE hatching), makes the sky look like it's one of van gogh's paintings lol. rendering-wise i'm not sure what's going on exactly with the light/shadow here, some of it just seems to defy the light source(s).
    quite flat to be honest.

    in terms of perspective, it's a bit wank, but maybe it's the style you went for here, a simple and symbolic one. if that was the case though, i feel some things (say, your character) could be simplified even more to fit in with that. so i'm not sure.

    compositionally i see a lot of even divisions, but otherwise it's alright i guess.

    clev:
    i feel this piece could have been a lot better if you were more consistent in terms of shape, a lot of shapes are more messy/wobbly than they should be, really. generally your shapes are very clear-cut, and in here it's like you tried to go for that but didn't quite do it entirely (see: torso, that star, etc).

    having those bright and saturated colors is also a very bold move, and it worked out well for the most part here, but i feel some of the combinations were a tad too jarring - the green popping here and there sticks out a bit too much. may be my taste though, not very keen on this kinda stuff.

    in terms of composition, it feels rushed. i can see a lot of tangents and i don't see a clear focus here. don't take my word on this, though.

    i probably will end up voting for her as her piece went more places (adventurous!) than clev's, but i'm not 100% on this.
    good luck to both.
     
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  8. NarwhaI

    NarwhaI "The Jedi of The Sea"

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    Wow..how amazing. they actually used MS paint on this one and gosh its came out pretty as fuck. both did a great job but imma go for "her" i don't know her mefunnylol
    but it was alot more detailed and its seems so realistic plus after i saw the references i was like holy shit thats a mech and she actually got the ability of using shades in MS paint which is crazy awesome. so yeah,its a "her" for me #kilmyself.
     
  9. Lynus

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    Congratulations to Hᴇʀ on the MBR win !
    Your points/medals will be awarded shortly.
     
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