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  1. Ainn

    Ainn ↻ Gravity Wielder
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    HARSH/SERIOUS CNC COMPLETELY WELCOME.

    Just dropping this by to see if there's anything terribly wrong I'm doing so far. I want someone to COMPLETELY break this shit down lol. What went right? What went terribly wrong? How could it be better? Next detail.

    Edit 1: Oh yeah, this is for my MBR Demo lol. In this animation, I will be going over the strengths and weaknesses for my weapon and character. I hope it makes sense to you all in the end... but CnC will definitely help. Be specific, too. C:

    Old Link without Character Profile: Here's the SWF.
     
  2. yeongy

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    looking really good so far, the only issue i see is that i feel like the arm should move a bit too when your dude catches his weapon

    also, the camera movement felt a little too sporadic before your dude shoots the gun.. i'd say lessen up the cam movements only slightly
     
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    just a little....

    other then that it was good
     
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    i like your choice of weapon.

    other than what has already been said, the entrance could have been better.
     
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    Nothing related to the animation, but I think you should fix up that hand on the ground, looks really weird.
    Looking really good Aaron, keep it up.
     
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    everything has been said i think, though i like the camera movements, gives it a sorta cinematic feeling.
     
  7. Ainn

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    If anyone has suggestions or complaints on this animation, go ahead and send them in. Even saying there's nothing wrong helps out quite a bit.

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    @yeongy, dax - Muffled the camera just a tad.
    @dd581 - Thanks. And I guess I'll have him walk up and have the camera SHOW what he's shooting at lol.
    @xLyynus - Fixed the hand. SWF not updated.
    @Synceizer - Good.

    There was one other suggestion from the chatbox regarding the moving arm when he shoots, and I have fixed that as well. Once again, SWF not updated yet as of 6/16/13 2:50am PST.
     
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    Loving the flash menu, looks great Aaron.
     
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    Looks good my man, the flash menu looks simple but really good. I like it very much. I wonder too, do you take request for something like that?
     
  10. Smile

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    Could be lot longer....

    that;s it.
     
  11. Ainn

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    @Judeas
    Uhh I guess? It's just a button on a dark grey screen.

    @[Smile], CloudyDaze and Quade
    Yeah yeah lol, I know. QQ

    Edit of 06/20/13:
    For now, I plan to keep going with Ain's Request Shop for some practice on leg proportion and shading, but on the 22nd, I'm coming baq to work on this more. Expect moar shiet.
     
  12. NecroiD_CrasH

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    the animation was legit, could have been longer to give me more shit to talk about, as far as the demo goes, the entrance could have been better, and also maybe you could show what your guy is shooting at before he is actually shooting it. idk something like that. Oh yeah, and the camera movements look spazzy on the gunshots so maybe you could tone that down or whatever
     
  13. Ainn

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    Finally back to work on this shiet. I've decided to leave the first animation as is, and to start one to debut my MBR Profile more. Of course, there'll be a shitload of action, just haven't animated it yet. Expect to see some other MM users featured in this as Rivals and on my Hit-List. (Not that I honestly have anything against anyone.)

    Without further useless babble, I give you
    the BETA WIP.
    Camera motions not finalized, click the SWF and press "A" without touching Capslock.
     
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