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Discussion in 'Comics' started by DarenDevil, Jun 14, 2016.

  1. DarenDevil

    DarenDevil kush kush kush

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    Finally finished this full-out hand-drawn comic ( except for the text) and there are some stray eraser marks that I couldn't get rid off (sorry about that) Other than that, this is:
    -Based on a true story that happened a few months ago (Sorry Callum,but it was too funny. Wont reveal your username ;] )
    - The order is a bit weird, because I just drew them on any box that looked like a good space.
    So I placed a red number on the boxes , so that it's easier to follow along (Order: 1,2,3,4...etc)

    So thanks for reading, and let me know what you think :] (criticism is welcomed)

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  2. DeeJayHD

    DeeJayHD Golden Member <3

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    Possibly the most relatable CnC Comic I've read.
    Good read, nice humor, made my day a bit better.
    Nice work, D.
     
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  3. PacosTaco

    PacosTaco Chief of the Mushroom Tribe

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    LOL

    I LOVE IT

    Cnc:
    Improve Camera Work
     
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  4. ForgettenSoul

    ForgettenSoul Sleepy
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    i like this
    like it much
    "jessica has denied your friend request" is that what made him sad :^)
     
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  5. DarenDevil

    DarenDevil kush kush kush

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    Thanks guys, really glad you liked it!
     
  6. Johano Sarutobi

    Johano Sarutobi Young Pupil

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    There was a COMIC thread and I didn't know?! This comic is gorgeously made, well done dude. I've actually made a little manga of mine before I started animating.
     
  7. DarenDevil

    DarenDevil kush kush kush

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    Thanks for the compliment bro, and I would like to see some of your work soon. Also, just a heads up, I will be releasing another comic soon : ]
     
  8. Johano Sarutobi

    Johano Sarutobi Young Pupil

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    Well, here is a little something I've done a while back. I'm really thinking of animating the rest of the story to really feel the impact, but with my current skills, that's not happening. XD

    https://plus.google.com/113764445315398998872/posts/dsXdgYoiQzd
     
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  9. Dally

    Dally Watcher of the Land
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    Now that's some excellent expressions you drew there! It really brought out the comic's atmosphere along with its details. Really good work!

    The link doesn't seem to work, also please stay on-topic to the person's work only, alright? :thatsok:
     
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  10. Johano Sarutobi

    Johano Sarutobi Young Pupil

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    Yeah, I'll be sure to bear that in mind. Sorry.
     
  11. Hope robinson

    Hope robinson Some loser

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    Scene 5 "...What they don't like my work? IMPOSSIBRU!" This is well made! I love it XD
     
  12. FiddleSticks

    FiddleSticks Veteran Membah'

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    This was very enjoyable and the expressions made were on point.
    The only possible CnC I can give is that the border alignments weren't straight on some parts, but that's just a pet peeve of mine and it shouldn't really matter.
    :0n0:

    Good work!
     
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  13. Noziki

    Noziki NPC
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    THE ART IS TOO MUCH FOR ME.
    I really enjoyed it overall! I hope you make more of these :'D !
     
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  14. Bronzeio

    Bronzeio Veteran Membah'

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    Instead of putting numbers, perhaps you could just go along with a pattern of order in the comic?
    ex. allowing the reader to simply read left to right.
     
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  15. Miles

    Miles Veteran Membah'

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    http://puu.sh/qbK18/61c3c8702a.jpg

    This face. That's some good shit right there, I love the hyper-detailed faces for reactions, shit kills me. Fantastic job man, keep it up!
     
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  16. KXenolith

    KXenolith LVL 1

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    Hey, I really like your maple comic.
    1st, I like it because I love comics :3
    2nd, because I'm relatable
    3rd and last, your drawings are very nice lol
     
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