Fuck your WIP

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  1. WhySoTommy

    WhySoTommy Better Than PacoTacos

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    This is an art trade I was regrettably working on.
    Why the fuck did I do 1 layer?
    To be finished when ever I'm not pissed off at myself.
    I CAN COLOR CLOTHINGS REALISTICLY, BUT THE HAIR AND FACE BECOMES AIDS.
    Save me.
    Fuck.
    this.
    kawaii.
    cute.
    shit.
    D:
     
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  2. NarwhaI

    NarwhaI "The Jedi of The Sea"

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    Why she has a dick? its looks like its coming out of the skirt and she got a boner
     
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    AM DOING 1 LAYER AS WELL. MUCH REGRET. Yours looks adorable so far tho = 3= and I dont see a dick so I dunno Krayu.
    Edit: I kinda thought it panties or something y'know lol
     
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    sorry it just i see a dick
    that lil'smudge over that short pants make it
    look like a dick
     
  5. WhySoTommy

    WhySoTommy Better Than PacoTacos

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    Oh hnngh you kinkles. ;; v ;; TY. I'll add spots on her panties. ♥
    but hur hur c;< boners.
    HEHEHEHEHEHE
    k gomen. time to go fix. xD
     
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    idk if you want crits on this (soz if you don't) so i won't really go in-depth, but the ends of her clothing don't really show the form that well. the stripes do, but then the ends just sorta break it up. also head shape is a bit off-kilter.

    there is more but those are the biggest things imo. again, soz if you didn't want crits
     
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    WhySoTommy Better Than PacoTacos

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    So like should I make the ends of her shirt as round as the stripes? Like showing the flow wise?
    And what do you mean the head is off-kilter?
    And no it's perfectly fine, crits would be great. xD Something to motivate me to fix things.
     
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    I like the colours you chose. Gives off a warm fuzzy feeling :'). Less depressing compared to your other works XD Not saying that your other drawings were bad.
    I think her eyes aren't symmetrical and 'her' right leg is shorter than the left even if you tried some perspective. I think the head shape shouldn't skew outwards from 'her' top-right like that, maybe that's what kronalker meant.

    Try flipping the image horizontally to pick up your mistakes. Keep up the hardwork :D
     
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  9. WhySoTommy

    WhySoTommy Better Than PacoTacos

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    ovo;. I'm sorry I still somewhat don't understand. >_
     
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    [​IMG]
    head shape is a bit unusual for more chibi-ish styles. normally you'd use simpler, rounder heads.
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    noticed also that the gestures of the arms could be defined a little better.
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    also the stripes could all just be pushed to go into one direction (in this case, towards the left). makes the form clearer idk
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    shapes in general could be simplified more, too many bumps imo. with styles like this, "less is more".
     
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