MBR: Azurector VS Nineb

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  1. Azurector

    Azurector Thief.

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    MBR: Azurector VS Nineb
    Sub Theme:
    Freestyle
    Due Date: February 14 / February 24
    Time Limits: 40sec min
    Note: This MBR was supposed to be released the February 24 2019, but it couldn't be released because of the new MBR system. I had Kayas' permission to release it today, so that's why there is no "challenge" on our profiles. Thank you for your understanding.

    Azurector
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    Profile:http://maplemation.com/threads/azurectors-mbr-profile.35685/
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    Notes: I'm very sorry for all the mistake (missing sfx, to re-used the same music and the bad grammar) i do, but beside that, It was pretty much fun to animate. So yeah enjoy the show ! (And thanks Zeruma to help me a lot for render)​

    Nineb
    Rank: Silver | 95
    Profile:http://maplemation.com/threads/ninebs-mbr-profile.35859/
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    Notes: I had a blast animating for this MBR, though I had some issues with the audio and file corruptions. But I think I did a great job
     
    #1 Azurector, Jul 26, 2019
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  2. quentin galloway

    quentin galloway Good with autism

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    Ok, new mbr that's amazing, my vote goes to nineb, like how the video is long and love how you handle the animation, fit the music and you 3d dimension.
     
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  3. Mespaint

    Mespaint Low-Tier Spirit

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    I understand it's free-style, but it should've been set-up a bit better. I know it was created before the MBR season release, but it's time to step it up and make something more directive, picking a better theme next time would be an improvement for sure. You guys can definetely do something solid!

    My vote goes to Azurector, because the animation was more fluid and better executed in terms of the "Free-style" fights you did. I know you've improved a lot since this so I won't comment on the errors. I know you've fixed them as of now.

    Nineb: Tbh, if your first scene was a bit longer and had sounds I would've most likely voted for you. 0:15 onwards looked pretty good, I dig your camera work.

    Take your time next time, and set this up better.

    Good work to you both, looking forward to MBR one of you someday.
     
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  4. Aqua

    Aqua Newbie

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    i was more of azu
    (cause of the music)
    the animation was more smooth
    it had sound effects

    while nineb
    no sound effects theres no sound effects to know when a character hits each other (they used anime music) but the animation was smooth aswell

    (but they're both very equal)kinda)

    but my vote goes to azurector
     
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  5. Miles

    Miles Veteran Membah'

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    Azurector's felt really flaccid, it seemed like while movements were happening and the animation was smooth; it didn't exactly seem engaging or compelling. If we subtract the 13 second intro, the animation is 50 seconds long, and the fight begins at 25 seconds. And as much as the fluidity helps makes things look better, sure it looked smooth, but as smooth as it was, it felt like it was a circle. Smooth, but in the end it went nowhere, much like the characters in Azurector's animation. Your animation looks good, but there’s a dire need for movement and motion with that fluidity.

    Nineb, you certainly have a bit of promise with your animation, but I’m really disappointed that you didn’t add sound effects - if you did, getting votes would certainly be easier for you. I like that while despite not having Sounds, your animation was a lot more dynamic, characters went all over the place from in the air to underground, and you had a good effort in keeping me wondering what was going to happen next. A bit of criticism I could throw your was was in the scene here:
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    This needed a bit more motion, because neither your or Azurector’s characters moved in this shot, which took me out of it.


    Overall, my vote has to go to Nineb. Go sickomode; and good job to everybody.
     
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  6. KingIke75

    KingIke75 KingIke75

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    Alright lets get down to business to defe-

    Azurector: The story seemed interesting and it was a good lead into the main fight. The animation was nice and overall smooth
    Nieb: I really liked your creativity in this animation and it was fast paced and interesting to watch, but not adding sound effects is kind of disappointing :(

    Overall: Both animations were fun to watch but I gotta give Nineb the vote for being more interesting with the actual fight

    Good luck to both of your future MBRs :)
     
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  7. Zeruma

    Zeruma A living joke

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    Hello !
    First of all , good job you do an amazing job , both of you !


    Good point of Azurector's Animation :
    -The animation is smooth , contain SFX and show more the interest of the Oc Of Azurector.

    Bad point :
    -The fight is kind of short (For a freestyle MBR)

    Good point of Nineb's Animation :
    -A really cool music B)
    -The fight is present all the time in the animation, a bit smooth
    Bad points :
    -No sfx , so we can't exactly know what happen , we know it's a fight but when nineb hit azu , i don't really feel it.

    I will now say my vote wich is for Azurector (if some SFX were put in nineb's animation , i think Nineb get my vote , put nvm !I say it again You do an amazing job !)
     
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  8. Infinity

    Infinity DYLAN ANIMATION

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    He we go again

    Azurector: The start was pretty good, but it didn’t really make much sense how they all of a sudden get right into the fight you should have at least had a scene where, your character was looking for Nineb’s character.

    The combat was smooth and animated well but way too basic. Nothing really made me say wow that’s new, as well as Goku’s blast attack not making any sound.

    Nineb: Very entertaining over all I really liked it.
    But In my opinion the pace really wasn't consistent at all, and it feels like you put more effort during the beginning than the end.

    Both animations were good but my vote goes to Nineb
     
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  9. Galva

    Galva I'm new here

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    I vote for Nineb !
     
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  10. Bio sans

    Bio sans Newbie

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    i totally vote for Nineb. the animation was really enjoyable and was way more pleasing to the eye. straight to the point also.
     
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  11. Kayas

    Kayas The Indolent
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    The votes come to 5-3 in Nineb's favour. This will be out 25 points instead of 15 due to the rank difference.
    Nineb: +16 MBR points (95>111 - ranked up to gold)
    Azurector: -23 MBR points (131>108)
    Thank you for the votes and congratulations to @Nineb on the win and for ranking up a tier! Locking and moving the thread now and will update profiles in a bit.
     
    #11 Kayas, Jul 28, 2019
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