[MBR] ScarfKanye v SunGod

Discussion in 'Animation Arena' started by [神] ScarfKanye, Aug 10, 2018.

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[Since Sungod didn't finish his Animation] Do i Deserve a MBR Point

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  1. [神] ScarfKanye

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  2. [神] ScarfKanye

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    Still sad my mans didn't finish
     
  3. Blez

    Blez UH WHOOPS??

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    I LOVE YOUR CHOREOGRAPHY!
    sad to see this work go wasted when he didn't finish it :l that would have been an interesting battle.
    I'mma vote for yes
     
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  4. UntitledOmega

    UntitledOmega Some Tired EdgeLord.

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    Isn't there a rule about if 1 participant doesn't finish or turn in a part its a win by default?
     
  5. Echo

    Echo Forever Tired
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    Not going to lie, your animation hit some vital spots since I'm both a big fan of Zelda, and Chrono Trigger, but this was amazing. I'd work on making the text more readable though.
     
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    Bruhh bands goes hard af lol

    Good stuff, got my vote for sure.
     
  7. Shulkle

    Shulkle Still the worst fight maker
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    No, they have to set up a poll asking if their animation is worth getting a point or not.

    Anyways,
    Good job on completing this and making the due date, Although, I do have a few criticisms I'd like to say about this.
    Firstly, I'm not sure what you're doing, but the ghosting is kind of jarring to me. Throughout the animation, I keep seeing a 50% transparency that's also layered with the character. I believe it's most noticeable around here. I'm not too sure what's going on. Maybe you're having some conversion problem, but I never really encountered this kind of thing, and I doubt you're doing this on purpose.
    Onto the animation itself, I think you overdid it with the camera moving around. Rewatching your animation over and over actually gives me a bit of a head
    ache. I know that having a moving camera can be good, but don't overdo it because it can leave the view disoriented. It's fine to shake your camera to add some dramatic effect. Just not to the point where we can't stand looking at the screen without going insane. At 0:29, you really shouldn't be shaking the camera like that. Anyone who wants to read the dialogue is going to have a hard time.
    Transition to the dialogue, disregarding how derpy the story is written, you should add filters of some sort to the text so it's more legible, and overall, better to look at.
    I actually think the fight looks pretty good....considering what you did on the second half LOL.

    Just touch up those points I made and you're good to go!
     
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