Theme: Story / Plot Have something going on in your animation. Something too simple such as two dudes bashing at each other's shoulders and starting a fight for it is not acceptable. Deadline: 7th of September, extended to 15th of September. Spoiler: Seth's Entry MBR PROFILE: http://maplemation.com/threads/seths-mbr-profile.35233/ Note: Holy damn, MBRing is scary. I never have put so much effort into one thing, and even then i still feel a bit embarassed for what it turned out to be, but at the same time i'm a bit proud. I recognize that my biggest mistakes was the pacing, too much trash talk and little fighting, which often makes things seem rushed/random, but on my side i have the excuse of having a deadline that limits me. Besides that, the swordfight scene seemed a bit bad, but i've learned the reason as to why, and lastly, though it's a minor thing, there are misplacements and bad alignements here and there. Though i'm not sure wether this could be called a flaw or not, i did not give Scarf's OC enough protagonism... In the end, in the fight he relied of the help of others. Either way, with this concludes the uber-edgy introduction of my new OC. Hope you all enjoyed what a ripoff Gilgamesh looks like! Spoiler: Scarf's Entry MBR PROFILE: http://maplemation.com/threads/scarfkanyes-mbr-profile.34179/ Notes: I had quite fun with this actually, though there are some problems I have with some shots with the camera, it's fine. I tried to add more story to this thing other than fighting. Maybe that was a bad idea since the fighting is short.