Due Date February 19 extended to the 23rd Theme: Freestyle {with kirbys or maple} Time limit: 40+ secondsSeans Animation: Seans Notes: None MBR profile: http://maplemation.com/threads/sgfs-mbr-profile.35271/ Sungods Animation: Sungods Notes: well after your opponent can only make 3 seconds for an Mbr and can't do anymore you start losing motivation to finish your animation. still hoping after all of this i can go back and finish this Mbr since its really important story wise. hope you guys can still enjoy this though. MBR profile: http://maplemation.com/threads/sungods-mbr-profile.33120/
Sean: The animation that you had was in my eyes solid, good adrenaline rush for the audience to give them a feel as if they were in the animation themselfs. Its tuff how you could only make a animation of 3 seconds, you still tried and props for that. However when it comes to the fight style itself. Im not really a fan of it and it was too quick imo SunGod: What you were going for as in a TV series was very good, it felt like as if i was watching some sort of maple crossover of DBGT which i liked alot I have nothing else to say other than its good overall But the "Shinn's Killer" took too long imo and i really wouldnt expect an organization like that in just the city, it would've been more like in a classified location but o well thats that For me? Im voting for SunGod on this one, Sean you tried and again props for that. But SunGod takes the cake on this one Good job to both of you, keep on animatin'
MBR: Sean, just throw me! Sean: OKAY. GO. shoddy perspectives aside, camera work, dialogue and the plot is interesting in sungod's part - too bad it wasn't developed from there
My vote goes to Sungod. And honestly, this is actually my favorite. It felt like watching an official T.V show. But for Sean, your animation is good but there needs to be more to it actually. GG you two :D
sad that it's an unfair battle. R I P sean But hopefully i can watch a fair battle someday! or maybe from sungod Vote goes to sungod. I enjoyed both! it's just way too short, sean :C can't wait to see more <3
Kinda sad that you put mad work into MBR's just to have the other person not give a damn really saddens me Vote goes to sungod
No shit to who im giving my vote to But i like doing story driven things so i can throw in my two cents in 1) Pacing is very off, there is a linear direction in which things head, but the timing of certain things is very un-oriented that it makes the story look like it spikes into diff events over and over and over which ovbiously makes the "linear" aspect not so "linear" 2) you should try a widescreen approach, it would help you in a number of ways but mostly it would give your animations a more cinematic feel and would give your text a better area to be placed in, within the black bars below. 3) no clue if you do this or not but make the attempt to story board with as crude of drawings as you wanted, this would allow you to fixate pacing, timing and a much more smoother flow within the events of your animations. i cant tell sean much cus 3 seconds, lmao. Spoiler: lmaoxdddddddddddd
absolutely loved sungod's animation, felt like i was watching a show, even had cuts. the characters all felt extremely expressive and comedic, very entertaining to watch. sean's combo was solid but it felt like he worked on it for a day and gave up, while you can clearly see in sungod's animation that a lot more thought and effort was put in to make it seem like a full fledged animation. i don't think this is a throw, i just think someone lost a lot of motivation early on. great work, keep it up and just try to finish ya animations!
I don't like this Situaaaaaaation... Songod: Your animation had a story.... if this was a personal project I'd be hyped, I'm not a good, cnc'er. and it's not like I could if I wanted.. it was mostly story, and it was interesting. I have been notified REPEATEDLY that I lack in such things so all I can say is that you did a good job and should practice your style more because you are good at what you do. I don't mean to be disrespectful but there's really not much I can say about Sean, it just be like that sometimes. Next time make sure you can actually guarantee that you can finish.
came back from the dead to give my 2 cents. vote goes to Light pacing was extremely good and the use of perspective was good. also nice combo Sean wish it was ya know a little more. Anyways back to beyond the grave for me have a nice day.
