Objective: Create a short about your OC in a creative, entertaining manner. Must have a cohesive story! I took some time to explain how Dar and Lit met up with Adi, who ended up employing them. And before you all go telling me what I should fix, let me tell you what I already know should be changed. Spoiler: Stuff I could fix and why I didn't do it. -A non static map and background. -Some animtion or simple rigging on the basic poses while talking. -A text box for dar's text, since it can be hard to read at times. (in fact just a primary or set location for any textbox in general) -No glow for Adi's text. -A bit better camera work. -Some background music instead of wind noise.(I couldn't find any that would fit this time around.) -Less explanation through text and more through actions(personal opinion.) As for why I didn't fix that stuff? Well first off I want to have a better laptop so I can make more complex stuff without it lagging. Secondly, I don't have all of the resources I need yet, so I'm a bit limited in what I can do. Finally, I actually plan on remaking this a year or two from now. And that's mainly because I don't feel like I was at a skill level to pull off what it was I wanted to do. This is the primary reason I'm leaving it as is. With all that being said, please give me some tips or some cnc on some things I might have missed. Thanks.