MBRQ: From Light, Unto Dark Objective: Create something related to angels or to devils, lest it be a weapon, armor piece or clothing piece, or even map pieces. My MBR Profile: http://maplemation.com/threads/chariots-sprite-mbr-profile.36120/#post-340883 Notes: angel and devil both trapped in a sword, thought it turned out ok
Very nice and smooth weapon with a light and dark theme over it. I like the angel and devil markings on the weapon like a sort of relic. but I'm not so sure on the blue band that holds the two blades together, I feel it could've been a black or dark grey color to give it more a neutral stance that balances the two blades together. All in all, I think you did the job well thematically and say you passed on this. Good job, fam!
gets the ok from me! i really like the details in the weapon like what dally mentioned. i'm not really that good at critiquing sprites so i'll just leave it at that. great job man
Your sprite is clean and well-made. It's a simple and good sprite, but I wish there was more to it. There's a hint of angel and devil-ness from the design on the blade. Although, the angel design is quite difficult to see unless zoomed in on the sprite. One thing I suggest when spriting is to avoid black inner-outlines and banding. It is not necessarily a problem for this sprite because it can be seen when you zoom in on it, but it's good to keep in mind for future sprites. MBRQs are a good way for spriting exercises, gaining spriting experience, and understanding of what you're doing well and what you can improve on. I give this a pass. Good job.
