MM City- Park

Discussion in 'Maps' started by Courtney Nightmare, Oct 11, 2015.

  1. Courtney Nightmare

    Courtney Nightmare Kaz.just call me that please.

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    I was playing around in Photoshop and deiced to make several maps when the quest from a few months back to bad i wasn't here when the challenge was up
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    Each one was done on Photoshop and you can download the Psd version with be linked soon
    Thanks to Goats for Re posting her map pack
    Cnc is welcomed but not really​
     
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  2. Kira

    Kira Lynus was herex2 !
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    Since this is MM theme, it would've of been nice if we could see a maple leaf somewhere in the map. Not like the Maplemation logo smacked
    somewhere. If I recall, there is a object of a giant maple leaf. It would've of been cool if you blurred it and then put it in the background.

    Some nitpicks:
    - People told me this is kind of a nitpick so yeeaaa, repeating tiles patterns. Don't repeat tiles pattern. It is super obviously when someone repeats tiles and it doesn't really help
    that those tiles happens to have that 1 rock piece.
    -[​IMG] personally, I think you should blur this tower. The tree in front of it is blurred, so that should be blurred.
    -Again, I think the bridge in the background is repeating.

    I think it is looks nice overall, but you can easily see how certain things are repeating.
     
  3. Courtney Nightmare

    Courtney Nightmare Kaz.just call me that please.

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    thanks for the advice with this ill know what to fix
     
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  4. Lynus

    Lynus R.I.P Reginald.
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    Because alot of the trees cover everything up, maybe consider moving everything up but not so much because you'll see the cropped out parts !
    It looks good for a first map, I would add more clouds and stuff from other maps just to make the space in the sky less like empty I guess.
     
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    oh

    looks good
     
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  6. Courtney Nightmare

    Courtney Nightmare Kaz.just call me that please.

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    Updated it -thanks for the suggestions
    might keep working on it
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  7. NarwhaI

    NarwhaI "The Jedi of The Sea"

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    Now it makes no sense..its looks like spring+fall together..how?
     
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    Add more clouds or something, it's boring seeing the same clouds loop over and over again, don't be scared to just whack a shit-tonne of em in.
    Should consider moving everything behind the trees up more, just for like I guess, it's pretty boring just having the tip of a mountain behind everything, you want to display it's fuckin' majesty over everything.
    Yeah, well, @NarwhaI's right, adding splotches of the Maple trees wont help, it's a predominately green-lush environment, it'd be weird to add something so vibrant as a Maple Tree in it or something.
    Maybe you could change the hue of the trees to match it ? If you're like thinking of something like that.
     
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  9. Courtney Nightmare

    Courtney Nightmare Kaz.just call me that please.

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    thanks again for more advice i will be able to tweak it with this input to make it look a lot more alive