Solignis Academy! (Canceled)

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  1. bluezemmi

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    Sorry lads, Cancelled.

    The Story

    Note: Before you ask, yes it is based of an Anime and I liked the idea of it and made a comic about the idea c:

    Have fun reading!



    Chapter 1: Introductions

    Chapter 2: Prepare for a War.
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    Page 12: Coming Soon!
    Credits:
    Bannedstory 4
    Kirimy Maps
    People who make the custom poses.
     
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  2. CCshinobi

    CCshinobi Filmmaker, Animator
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    Wow, pretty sick concept! Now if only school was actually that chill.

    "Permission to fight?"
    Teacher "Okay"
    LOLWUT

    In all seriousness though, I enjoyed it. Your characters have personality and style, which is always a plus. Some of the blur effects feel slightly overdone, but nevertheless the visuals were nicely executed.

    ...what exactly did she drop in the 2nd chapter? A wallet and phone? O_o

    I'm curious to see if that was significant in any way to a future event in the story. Keep going man!
     
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  3. Lynus

    Lynus R.I.P Reginald.
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    Man, I DONT LIKE THE RESIZED MOUTH NOWASDAYDSYSS

    Feeling alot of baka to test in this

    Sometimes your text is kinda irky.. Not too much of a colour text thing, i think a black outline or something will do, stuff like what LGHacker did in SS
    some panels arent like exact spacing away from eachotehr and sugarnuts but this is v1p2

    yeah this is definitely baka to test LOL

    THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD !
    big fan of the rotations.
    hm, i think you should variate with the panels more often.
     
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  4. bluezemmi

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    Haha thanks man :D

    She dropped her backpack in the 2nd chapter c:



    Thanks :D
    Yes it is based of Baka to test c:
     
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    really loved it ! this is great. xD can't wait till next page
     
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