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Discussion in 'Animations' started by LeoV
, Aug 8, 2015.
Lemme rip these, they're perfect
did this a while ago but didn't feel like finishing it
Not bad for starters, though I feel that this is missing some basic components that you should probably be aware of.
First, I feel that you'd have a much easier time aligning your poses and swings with an alignment line. Having an alignment line would ensure that you feet are always on the same level as the previous pose when transitioning.
You may also want to trace-bitmap your characters. Here's a quick gif of how to do so.
Now as for the actual swinging, it seems as if you're just sliding uncontrollably. Yes, you do slide after swinging, but no, you don't slide before you do the next swing. Because you slid across the floor after every pose change, it looks like you're on ice and also trying to show that you did swing your sword, when all you really did was change poses.
That's about it honestly. Good job for a first animation!
Dunno what else to say but comment and critique
this is my Second anim
Aye First Animation CNC this shit
I am definitely no critic, but I don't think the sandbag should be positioned in the air for that long. Just saying...