The Dumpster (post your tests and super short anims here)

Discussion in 'Animations' started by LeoV , Aug 8, 2015.

  1. Ainn

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  2. KirbyEspada

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    did this a while ago but didn't feel like finishing it

    also heyyyyy

     
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  5. Shulkle

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    Not bad for starters, though I feel that this is missing some basic components that you should probably be aware of.
    • First, I feel that you'd have a much easier time aligning your poses and swings with an alignment line. Having an alignment line would ensure that you feet are always on the same level as the previous pose when transitioning.
    • You may also want to trace-bitmap your characters. Here's a quick gif of how to do so.
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    • Now as for the actual swinging, it seems as if you're just sliding uncontrollably. Yes, you do slide after swinging, but no, you don't slide before you do the next swing. Because you slid across the floor after every pose change, it looks like you're on ice and also trying to show that you did swing your sword, when all you really did was change poses.
    That's about it honestly. Good job for a first animation!
     
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    this is my Second anim
     
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  8. Delosboi

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    Aye First Animation CNC this shit
     
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    I am definitely no critic, but I don't think the sandbag should be positioned in the air for that long. Just saying...
     
  10. Darlit Glitch

    Darlit Glitch The lurking enigma
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    Try working on your sense of momentum and weight. If things go up, they also fall down, and if things hit hard, they have some kind of wind up and continuation.
     
  11. Jade

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    http://www.fastswf.com/lfsb6XE
    Yerr
    CnC if ya want, there's not tooooooo much to this cause its ~15 seconds lol

    Only an MBR would let me make a longer anim -wink-
     
  12. BulbaWhat98

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    I'm planning to make a maplestory edition of the Everyone is HERE! Trailer from Super Smash Bros Ultimate. It'll include 47 animators and 3 non-animator characters. I really hope you're all looking forward to it. :)

    Characters:
    #01 Derek (spritefan2)- https://www.youtube.com/user/spritefan2
    #02 Dray (dray86)- https://www.youtube.com/user/dray86
    #03 Drew (DrewVissX)- https://www.youtube.com/user/bulletbi...

    Videos:
    . Maple Rushed 5- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyPTJ...
    . Smash Mushroom Collab 3- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CA8zl...
    . Dray86 (GreenCream)- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=URmJw...
    . Maple Kombat IX Official Trailer- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UEtc5...
    . ...?- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaH8C...

    Keep in mind that I won't be able to include every maple animator ever since I want each animator and the 3 non-animator characters to have enough time on the screen.
     
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    A basic use in transitions and clipping, but it definitely did its job as a trailer parody!
     
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    Unrusting, meep~!
     
    #1054 Tra-La-Tracey, Jul 13, 2018
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    Can someone give me an advice on what I need to improve on?
     
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    these lyrics omfg
    i love it. i love you.
     
  17. BulbaWhat98

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    Full Collab-


    Featuring- Me, Mitch, and guest character Danny from Cold Skin (xNightstars)


    I know I uploaded 5 collab parts last year, and I did plan to make more than 1 collab part, but it was rough for me to get back into animation. I still hope you guys enjoy this collab part and the full collab.
     
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    Part 2 is in the works. I can't wait to add more animators into the Everyone is HERE! Maplestory Edition saga.

    Characters so far:
    51 Makani- https://www.youtube.com/user/CapsLock...
    52 Gregio (GregioKnight)- https://www.youtube.com/user/GregioKn...
    53 Summer (SummerAmore)- https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXTu...
    54 Niv- https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXUl...
    55 Amit (Amitlevy14)- https://www.youtube.com/user/amitlevy14
    56 Victor (Wìnd)- https://www.youtube.com/user/xxvictor...
    57 Burned (Bunedmagix)- https://www.youtube.com/user/Burnedmagix

    Videos so far:
    1) Makani Vs Gregio- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSXcA...
    2) Smash Zombie Collab- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xzEtz...
    3) Naruto VS. Gregio- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3M_PN...
    4) The GIF Collab- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Utkj2...
    5) Watch If You Want More TST! =D- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SokVY...
    6) MBR: Derek vs Nivlac [WIN] [#3]- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T--v3...
    7) MBR/SFC vs. Nivlac [unfinished]- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c_RF_...
    8) [Maple] Generations Collab- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eUndN...
    9) Smash Mushroom Collab 3- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CA8zl...
    10) My Movie 7- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9CNM...
    11) MBR Vs Pixel [WIN]- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRPw-...
    12) RUSH (Asasinsonic vs Burnedmagix)- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98go-...

    Part 1- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSVFO...
     
  19. Merron Pan

    Merron Pan KONO DIO DA

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    Just a quick preview/ae test of an upcoming animation i'm thinking about doing.
    there's 3 versions of this thing but the other 2 (added idle pose and bg birds) didn't render out in the right quality.
    not a whole lot to show but I tried to work on aesthetics a bit.
    its so hard to motivate yourself to animate... send help guys lmfao

    (suggested to watch in full screen)
     
    #1059 Merron Pan, Jul 17, 2018
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  20. Delosboi

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    CNC would be appreciated