The Dumpster (post your tests and super short anims here)

Discussion in 'Animations' started by LeoV , Aug 8, 2015.

  1. BrannyMannyBee

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    I don't know what the customs are for responding to CnC but just thought I should say thanks and no need to apologise for the long explanation, if anything I was racking my brains the weekend before I uploaded the video trying to find solutions to the exact things you mentioned but I couldn't think of any at the time and this is definitely going to help (trying to figure out how to do the impact on that last hit was a nightmare and looking at the walk again, I had it in a symbol but it was thrown off center by the bat and I didn't notice it so I'm going to be more careful with that). To be honest I'm surprised any of it was described as good, I was hoping for decent if I was lucky so yay confidence boost I guess.
     
  2. Narky

    Narky Time stone protector.

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    Aerocobe Senior Membah'

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    Can we have an MBR LOLL. The animation itself is not so bad either. Although, you might want to fix up your physics cuz its a tad wonky, but other than that, I like the comedy element that you added in. Keep going broski and i think you'll make it far!
     
  4. Narky

    Narky Time stone protector.

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    appreciate the CnC! as soon as i finish my character up ill be down to MBR.
     
  5. smol

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    my first animation ever, any critique will be welcomed with open arms c:
     
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  6. 2Fit2BeADit

    2Fit2BeADit Amateur

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    I think it's really nice! In my little to no experience I would say add some sort of wind up to the character from when he's on the floor and the jump. It looks a bit odd getting such distance from a prone position. Maybe throw in another sprite in between. I also like how you used the transform effect to make it more jello like, makes it look nicer. Though I do think the amount of the squish from when he lands and when he gets up from that position is too similar. Vary the amount of the squish and it'll be gold.

    Great stuff! I'd soon like to post my own things and your work provides encouragement.
     
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  7. smol

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    thanks a bunch! and I'll take that to heart, hopefully tomorrow I'll have time to make something else with a proper background and all! :)
     
  8. SoporificGamer

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    Pretty good for your first animation
     
  9. BenthekidRS

    BenthekidRS Friendly Action Gamer

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    Back to animating.
     
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    BenthekidRS Friendly Action Gamer

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  12. SwordGrayFire

    SwordGrayFire Voice Actor

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    Hunter H*cking Dies.

     
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  13. 2Fit2BeADit

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    Left kind of just happened. The right is based on what I believe is xultimate_animationsx's template.
     
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  14. SunGod

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  16. Beamation

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    @DuhMistuhCrek suggested I take things slow since its my first time animating...so here's some little things I made. I would really love feedback. I think the second one is too "bouncy" but other than that what can I do to improve? I use aseprite for my animations.

    (and shoutout to @Dally for his spritesheet lol)

     
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  17. DuhMistuhCrek

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    That is good! I like it, try using the walk cycles, it's also a good start
     
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  18. DuhMistuhCrek

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    Frigging first? You make everyone proud son!
     
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    AznMagix Fireworks Animator

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  20. 2Fit2BeADit

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