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The nice devil

Discussion in 'Comics' started by bluezemmi, Jul 25, 2015.

  1. bluezemmi

    bluezemmi Love all of you
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    Now that's a cool devil you want to meet.
    @TheWind you got a cool looking devil.

    Enjoy this fresh made comic. :coolguy:
     
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  2. TheWind

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    I fucking love it.
     
  3. Lynus

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    LMAO that hair looks so plastic HAHA
    Hm, I feel like that the panels were too big and probably had not much emphasis on the actual frames - but idk comics so ya
     
  4. bluezemmi

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    I like working with big panels so I can show stuff more.
    Altho the last page was very rushed.
     
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    The day I helped defeat a monster.* (You needa fix the eyes on the face, it looks very off...)
    Or how I helped girl scouts sell their cookies.*
    Or how I fought those bandits.*
    Man, those were good times.*

    The "shine" sound effect was completely unnecessary in my opinion. It doesn't emphasize anything. The "bling bling" could have a better effect, instead of a red outline. Maybe a yellow to white gradient?

    Also, I'm interested in how you got made the rotation of some of these images so good :O any tips?
     
  6. bluezemmi

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    Yeah now I'm seeing it. The shine effect looks out of place.
    Never tried a yellow with a white outline before. Might try it once.

    You can try to use a little bit of surface blur to make it look a litttle bit smooth.
    And rotated sprites look good if they are atleast resized 300%.

    literally the reason I like big panels tho.
     
  7. Tom

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    Not necessarily outline, but I would put it inside the font. If I were doing this, I would do it like this.

    It makes it more dynamic in a way, and it goes with the word.

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  8. bluezemmi

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    Oh shit, Never thought of using gradient blurs in texts.
    This looks interesting to use.
     
  9. Thewindyfan

    Thewindyfan I'm too slow for this shit

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    This is freaking nice! but TFW I get a notification saying I'm tagged in the post when it's really TheWind



    cmon mm tech differentiate!

    ot: I love how it all looks, and it's so well organized too! please make more :DDD
     
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  10. CCshinobi

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    So brief. So simple. Yet so beautifully done.
    I was going to comment on how we still don't know too much about the character, but then I realized...that wasn't the point.
    I fking love the message you're sending. We need more themed stories like these <3

    Awesome work with the visuals and canted transitions too! The style and visual tone of this is close to perfection.
    Please make more :D
     
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    The last panel is missing a border around it. Looks pretty good though. I agree with the above though, the text could be better for the "sound effects".
     
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    His hair makes me feel obsolete.
    More please.