Haha cool! I liked the arm movements when Shulk gave the barrel one last push (though the head could be moved to the right a little more). :DD The text was sorta confusing o.o The English kept moving around -- should probably keep the placement of the different languages consistent to make it less confusing :o
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Anyways, It was interesting. In general, this isn't bad, but some movements seem unnecessary or just off. Few details that could have been fixed or improved on also bother me. As bad as my rig is, you could have moved it a little more upward/ensured it connected to my body. The way I pushed the barrel in the end was uh...overdone in resizing. And then jumps like Jaycie's, that blue girl's jump, you ought to compress and then jump. Of course, don't overdo it making everyone jello. 0:06 - 0:08 What happened. Why'd everything resize? How is Drew not affected o.o Again, ought to double check the arm placement. Have to move the pivot point so every limb could tween easily. Easing movements would probably help you out too. My ears exploded a little at when the music/beat kicked in. You can probably use a variation of poses to shoot the gun. Started looking like copy n paste. Rigging the arms and creating some recoil could work. You may want to actually align the whole split/screen thing. The gun is already covering the other portion of the screen, and I barely see the line of the split. May want to zoom out on that pov. I really don't get Drew's arm movements. It just seemed too random. My main gripe about this overall is mainly details/stuff I believe could have been better. Again, I wouldn't say bad...just uh...yeah :T. Spoiler: This is me when I give up on life
