Wishing By Sunrise (WIP)

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Well, would you seem interested in this..?

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  1. Nicaryan-Knight

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    This is an unfinished story that spans across a few characters' perspectives. The way things are written here are somewhat like a script. Also, this whole thing is just to present what happens to each character through the two years. Only later, will the final draft of the story, Wishing By Sunrise, be written, and it will successfully combine all the events taking place in this story into one that may make sense. but as for now, it's just a story for each person's perspective. And lots of them.

    <EVELYN JOHNS>
    Wishes: Y1- Identity Change ; Y2- Hugh's Disappearance (enhanced by both of Erisu's wishes)
    Year ONE
    Evelyn had only appeared into the universe a week before the Session's premier. Dealing with jerks who call her a 'witch', Darwin had encountered the situation at the nearby park, stressing himself to not be a bystander, he decided to take action to stop the many bullies to walk off. A struggle begins and it ends with the two on the ground, severely injured. Darwin discovers that she has no place to go, then offering her to stay over at his apartment. She had lived with him since. A week later, Darwin's mother applied Evelyn to go to school and even legally gave her the family's last name, almost like adopting her. And it was on this day she made her first day in school, she had met Hugh, who found much potential in her, invited her to join a group where they each wear a dreamweaver, he offers the blueprint of the most basic of dreamweavers to Evelyn, who shares it with Darwin so they may both have a dreamweaver. Taking the two a couple days to make their dreamweavers, the next night, both Evelyn and Darwin wore it to sleep, as Evelyn treasures it, Darwin would rather take it off, but Evelyn will not let him, unless he's to get wet. They both end up in the same dream, to look at each other was rather strange, they couldn't identify each other as they both wore armor, that was until Darwin took off his helmet and Evelyn noticed that he looked like Darwin, he questions her, then reveals herself. They confront Hugh about the dreamweaver's effect, of which he says is what was planned, he tells them that if they participate and last to the end of the year, they can get a wish that they can use anyday at sunrise. They both seem skeptical, but were conviced after the many other strange things that Hugh had shown them. They then decide to keep at it, so then Hugh had declared that the Sessions may begin, he notified Evelyn that there was a guide that came with the blueprint for the dreamweaver. They attended to it as soon as they made home. They then begin their tasks and contracts with each other, no communication whatsoever. As they made it through the year, they had made lots of progress, although, it was Darwin who seemed to be doing any work as Evelyn seemed to get worse over the year as she had gained conscious over her counterpart, which had especially made Darwin irritable. Although, closer to the end of the year, she had improved in a significant rate. throughout the year in reality, Evelyn had begun to realize that she is becoming a burden on Darwin and that she is really only making his life worse, and with the good performance she's making in school, she had been invited to a school with a great future for her. She considers this chance, and soon notifies Darwin of it. She really didn't want to leave to her new school, as she feels that she must be connected with Darwin. Nonetheless, she makes her wish to change her identity, and that's when Darwin bursts out, begging her to stay.

    Session Break
    Every day after that they had spent time together, talking and such boyfriend girlfriend things. But that's when she found out of Darwin's mother's death, Darwin explained to her that it was spontaneous combustion, then they knew that she had been participating in The Sessions. She decides to investigate further into the death rate across the globe. That's when she discovers that Hugh had caused the deaths of several hundreds of people. She confronts Hugh about it. He tells her that it is only the fate of those who are spiritually weak, which included almost all of the terrible things in the universe. He had also stated that this universe is boring now that all the baddies are gone, that there must at least be something interesting to live for, otherwise, life is imperfect. She begins to develop her hatred towards Hugh, screaming that she will wipe him from existence, of which he only gives her a deathly glare before leaving and calling her off, informing her that she is still free to participate in the Sessions, as he finds this newfound hatred to be a new interesting variable in the absolute equation. She truly despises him since then. She soon arrives to Darwin's quiet apartment, storming in and telling Darwin of the terrible things that Hugh is doing. After telling him of not being able to decide if she's ready to go another year of these Sessions, she rips her brace off and throws it at the wall and begins to sob, being taken to his lap, she cries her tears away until she falls asleep. When she had awoken, she sees Darwin watching the television, as it showed many of the citizens screaming about Judgement Day. She then sits up, telling Darwin about he she realizes that the people around the world have noticed this and are all affected by it, that someone dear to them must have died. Darwin confirms this and notifies her that everyone believes this as some religious event, but he also informs her that he was able to spot more participants. She begins to understand that others had obtained a Dreamweaver blueprint and either have managed to survive this far, have just now been introduced to the event, or have not made their brace yet. Darwin understands this as she goes along with the details. A short paude of silence then Darwin tells her that it's not very likely that Hugh can start another Session anytime soon, as he must be worn out from maintaining the first year. Darwin then concludes that they should take a break to relax in the least. Evelyn isn't very sure about relaxing, especially since there are lives at stake. But she understands that Darwin must be tired from all the missions over the year, she tries to go along with it. They spend the next two months, trying to make the the time of their life together, but still they seem rather anxious. They sit at a bench, her head relaxed on his shoulder. She hears Darwin stating that even though they were on break, it wasn't very relieving and it didn't go so well, she just nods. A short pause and she suggests that they should try to get stronger, so they may last to the next wish, to see if they can wish everything back to normal. Darwin reassures her, and she begins to feel confident that everything will be fine. When they went home, they had conducted an experiment to see if they can still access the alternate reality, even if the Sessions weren't active. There were nothing but practice simulations, but it was enough for the two to practice for the rest of the two months. During those two months, Evelyn especially seems relieved and can finally enjoy herself once more.

    <DARWIN JOHNS>
    Wishes: Y1- To Remain With Evelyn ; Y2- Become The Carrier of The Time Table (favor from Hugh)
    Year ONE
    Darwin's life was really unappealing to him and didn't give him very much meaning to his life, that was until Evelyn had barged into his life. Burdened by Evelyn, there was lots of trouble she had been dragging him into. In the middle of Year ONE, his mother had died as a participant of the Sessions, of which he had not known she had part of. Near the end of Year ONE, he realizes that no matter how much he had despised having Evelyn's presense to bring him down, for the past weeks, he had actually enjoyed having her as a partner. He confronts her about actually feeling rather secure about her being close, although, he still feels best for her to go on as she had been invited to attend a great school. After Evelyn makes her wish, he bursts out, begging her to stay, even confessing of the great time he's had with her.

    Session Break
    As they had been together, they began talking to each other and venting out, then Evelyn found out that his mother had died of spontaneous combustion due to the Sessions, then discovering that several hundreds had died due to the event Hugh had created. He is told by Evelyn that she will confront Hugh about this, he tries to speak of the positive side of it, but it doesn't really seem to help the situation. He just watches her walk off until she disappears into the fog. He waits for her in his apartment. Evelyn returns, informing him that Hugh only created the Sessions so that he may begin an interesting way for the world to be purified of baddies, and that he enjoys the fact that the human population is lowering, She tells him that she's still allowed to participate in the Sessions, but she doesn't know if she should consider participating again. He watches as she rips the dreamweaver off of her wrist and pitches it against a wall. She begins sobbing and he takes her head into his lap, looking at her face, he reflects on what has happened over the past year. Soon after Evelyn's fallen asleep, he turns on the television, and discovers that the school had been shut down as almost every administrator had also disappeared. He sees that many of the citizens are getting rowdy over this event. Nobody knows what the cause of these spontaneous combustions are, but many are to believe that God is bringing Judgement Day upon them, now afraid to do anything sinful. He sees that there are some people within the crowd that don't seem to be phased by it at all, he gets under the suspicion that there are other dreamweaver users out there. He notices Evelyn's awakening as she begins to bring herself to sit upright. She tells him of her realization of many of the citizens' losses. Darwin then explains to her that he believes there are still many other dreamweaver users out there. Evelyn replied with some logic of how they may correlate to the blueprints. Darwin follows along with her explaining the details. Darwin informs her that he doubts that Hugh will begin another Session anytime soon as he must be worn out, so he suggests to Evelyn that they may take a little break to relax a little bit in the least. This was his attempt to ease Evelyn's pain, but he knows this won't last very long. The next two months of trying to make the time they have left until the Sessions last, but even during this break, they were uneasy. They sit at a bench, Evelyn's head lying on his shoulder. Darwin states that trying to enjoy a break didn't seem to work very well. Evelyn agrees. A short pause and Evelyn breaks the silence to talk of the future, that maybe wishing everything back to normal might fix everything, that they should prepare for the next year so they may make that wish come true. Darwin doesn't seem to believe that even a wish could fix things here. He tells a white lie so it may reassure her confidence more. When they went home, they had conducted an experiment to see if they can still access the alternate reality, even if the Sessions weren't active. There were nothing but practice simulations, but it was enough for the two to practice for the rest of the two months. During those two months, Evelyn especially seems relieved and can finally enjoy herself once more, but Darwin still knew that nothing was to change, but he was willing to act normal, for Evelyn's sake of happiness.

    Year TWO
    They spend one another entire year working together in Year TWO, syncronized. At the end of Year TWO, he had done Hugh a favour of holding onto his Time Table. Which leads him into a coma. After Evelyn's second wish, the crystalline fortress spawns around him as he's in the hospital. As chaos had sprung, he had been selected as Chiharu's replacement by default, as he had more life force left compared to Chiharu, who had been hosting the Time Table for so long. As he had been in the Time Table, he had thought of nothing but Evelyn, as she was truly the reason why his life had any meaning.

    <ERISU YANGI>
    Wishes: Y1- Hayato's Ressurrection (FAILED) > A Chance to Be With Hayato Once More ; Y2- Enhance Evelyn's Next Wish
    Year ONE
    She spends time with Hayato, her boyfriend. They had tended to hang out with Hugh, as they were interested in his crazy out-of-this-world theories, this meant that the three of them were indeed great friends, and a benefit came from that, they too will have had knowledge of Hugh's ideas. Not only this, but it meant that they were to be the first to get their blueprints, but Hayato had given his up as he believes every blueprint is the same and that they only need one. Because of this, they had shared the same dreamweaver type, the prototype, which was only skilled in fire. This was truly the only kind of dreamweaver there was, that was until they suggested Hugh to get creative with the different kinds of them, so they may each have different abilities. They were the first to experience such phenomenon as beta testers. They helped Hugh improve the system more as to where it was ready to be sent out as he felt rather pumped to get a lot of others involved into it. It takes a month of them practicing each night as they had awaited the beginning of the Sessions, and she and Hayato were going to do it together, as partners. It was at the halfway point of the Session when Hayato had been struck down. Erisu tries to catch him as he fell into a dark abyss, as she had gone after him, the dream began to slow down to a halt, Erisu still trying to move. The dream begind to fade away to darkness as Erisu begins to awaken herself to the sunlight in her eyes. She believes that it's truly only a dream connected with him, that he isn't actually affected by it. It is when she had visited Hayato's houshold that his mother had greeted to her and bringing her grave news. She drops to the ground and tears up. Silently crying, she reflects on the laws of the Sessions. Hayato's mother brings her up to comfort her for the time she needs to cry over him. Next scene shows Erisu lying in bed, her face showing obvious greif. Her father enters the room, informing her that he is sorry for her, but fact that she must go to school. She remains silent. Her father reconsiders it and tells her that she can just take a couple days off and he'll write a note. The couple days have passed and she enters the school, placing the note down at the attendance office. The vice principle checks up on her and questions if she's to be okay after her boyfriend's sudden firey death. She stated that she'll be fine, she then walked off to continue school. The vice principle doesn't believe it as it's obvious to everyone that Erisu's greiving. When she makes it to the cafeteria to sit with Hugh, the table remained silent. Nobody talked and everyone in the cafeteria were to stare at her being alone for once, but that wasn't the case, everyone knew what happened, and they can clearly see her pale face. Hugh just stares at his plate until he tries to apologize to her, but Erisu jerks herself upward to begin screaming at Hugh. She starts shouting at Hugh for not telling her that dying in a dream can actually kill someone in reality. People around the cafeteria are confused. Hugh just stood there, not knowing what to say. Erisu begins sobbing as she screams at Hugh with resentment, shouting about how he had killed her boyfriend. She stops shouting to take a deep breath before dropping down to lay her head down on the table as she wraps her arms around her head, now wishing if only she could bring him back, now regretting ever meeting Hugh. She just sobs throughout the rest of lunch break, everyone just staring at the two, not knowing what to do. When lunch break had ended, Erisu got up from the table to turn around to find that a counselor stands before her. He places a hand on her shoulder, offering her to stay home for a little longer. She just nods, still hiding her damp face away by keeping her head down low. The next scene shows her in bed, curled up in a blanket. Her father knocks on the door, informing her that she can't stay in her room forever, that she will have to go to school, that she must move on. She could never move on. Hayato was far too precious to her for her to just throw him away, even after his death. Her father hears no response. He just sighs and leaves her alone. She just zones out as she stares off, looking at her wallpaper of her and Hayato, slowly drowsing away until she receives a message from Hugh. She quickly turns off her phone and leaves it there, tossed and turned herself to look away from the phone, taking her dreamweaver off, then drowsing away. It was as she had slept, she was reflecting on the events taken place. She remembers saying that she wished that she could bring Hayato back to life. Soon after giving that deep thought, she remembers that a wish can be acquired by making it to the end of a Session. She then gets the hope of being able to bring her love back to life by acquiring a wish, and in order to do that, she must continue and finish the Session. But first, she must discuss things with Hugh. She wakes up, picking up her phone, seeing it being the weekend. She looks over the many messages Hugh had sent her, asking for how to gain forgiveness. She considers it and then remembers her revelation from the past night. She calls Hugh, who seems relieved that she hadn't jumped off of a bridge, but she interrupts him, ordering him to meet her at the park to discuss things, she informs him that this is how she will be able to forgive him. She knew that he was willing to take the chance for forgiveness. He stands at the bench as Erisu approaches. She can see him uneasy and anxious for forgiveness, as he begind to speak, she slaps him straight across the face, shocking him. She stated that if he desired for forgiveness, he must remain calm and answer questions. They both stand at the bench, a long pause. She breaks the silence. She states that Hugh knows everything so thay he should be able to answer just about any and every question she has for him. He nods, still uneasy about this confrontation. She asks him about ressurrection. She can clearly see fear in his eyes, she questions if there's anything wrong. Hugh nervously states about not really knowing anything about bringing the dead back to life, but he states that if she wishes on it, it might come true, but he informs Erisu that he isn't sure if it will work, as he had never encountered this kind of scenario. She was willing to give that attempt a go, so she dismisses Hugh, addressing him as forgiven. She then walks off. In her head, she vows that she will get to spend time with Hayato once more. She will do whatever it takes to be with him again, but suicide isn't the answer as she knows that he wouldn't like it. She will become the raging storm that slashes through any obstacle. She then takes every night with utmost caution and vigilancy. Looking forward to the day of seeing him once more, so they may be together. At the end of the Session, she meets with Hugh at the top of a hill in the still dark morning. Prepared to make a wish. Hugh comments that she's changed a whole lot since they had last seen each other. Erisu tells him off, for him to shut it. She then prepares to make the wish. When the sun had begun to rise, she clenches to her heart with absolute will, she shouts out her wish with all of her almighty spirit. Several moments pass and Hugh states that it is possible in every universe that none may be brought back to life. She stares off into the sunrise, her eyes tearing up as she drops to her knees and tilted back, gazing off into the sky, her eyes filled with despair. She screams her heart out, it echoes across town and the scene fades.


    Session Break
    The next scene shows her questioning if her wish had been wasted on her stupid failure of a wish. Hugh informs of otherwise, that the wish hadn't gone away.


    Year TWO


    <VAIA REM>
    Wishes: Y1- Hugh's Knowledge ; Y2- The Strength to Sever The Time Table
    Year ONE
    She watched as Erisu was screaming at Hugh in the cafeteria, wondering what the problem was. She understands that Erisu's boyfriend had died, but to hear that it was Hugh's fault? Vaia investigates this further when she arrives back home. She powers on her computer to do research on the amount of deaths for the past months. As she had thought, it was much more than the average death rate. She plans the next day to confront Hugh of what had happened. The next morning, on her way to school, Vaia sits down in the bus, lying against the window. She thinks over on how Erisu had been screaming at Hugh back at the cafeteria. Perhaps Hugh really does have something to do with it. As she enters the schoolgrounds, she rushes through the courtyard to search for Hugh. When she identifies Hugh in the crowd, she swiftly makes her way to him, grabbing his wrist and dragging him to the trees nearby to hide, explaining to him that this discussion mustn't be heard, that nobody else should be able to hear. When they had arrived to a hidden area behind the trees, Hugh asked what it was that she needed. She glares him with deep concern. She asks him if it's true that he had to do with Hayato's death. Hugh froze, giving her the idea that he's guilty of being connected to the investigation. She then questions him of what he had to do with Erisu's boyfriend's death. Hugh caught himself a deep breath before simply stating that he only came up with an event of which they participated in, at their own risk of course, but that Hayato had failed a night and was taken from life. She then questions of what this event is. She gains knowledge of the event and requests if she may join. He had first asked for her name before allowing so. Hugh had stated that he had one last blueprint left. He gave her the blueprint, telling to be prepared for anything as he clearly states to her that whatever happens to her will be her own fault, that she is at her own risk. She takes full responsibility of her actions, and grabs the blueprint. Hugh informs her that the bell was to ring soon, so he begins to run off but Vaia latches onto his arm, stopping him once more. She tells him that Erisu may begin doing stupid things, that Hugh may need to watch over her to make sure she doesn't start anything ludicrous, He just nods and leaves and Vaia lets go of his forearm. The next scene moves on to Vaia getting off of the bus and walking the rest of her way to her home. As she strolls along the sidewalk, her head looking quarterway downwards, she reflects on how Erisu could be doing right now. That's when she realizes, that Erisu might be going very far with her desire to be with Hayato once more. When she arrives home, she knocks on the door to be greeted by her father as he lets her in, she greets back. As per usual, her father asks her about her day. Vaia sits down on the table across from her father, her head slightly down, informing him that she isn't sure if Erisu might take it very well that her boyfriend is dead. Her father replies, telling her that he believes it was spontaneous combustion, as they found no remains of him, but some ashes on his bed. He continue on, then saying of how Erisu will somehow get over it and that Vaia shouldn't have to worry so much about other people. Good thing she hadn't reported of Hugh, because that adds to the amount of stress he will take as he already has the entire school despising him. She tells her father as she gets up that she's going to head off to her room to do homework, of which her father replies, asking about how her grade were. She simply states that there hasn't been a progress report yet. And she walks off to her room and closes the door shut. She reads over the blueprint, even reading the guide before anything else. She goes over every bit of information. She reads over this for days before understanding the works after much thought. She even believes that she can modify the way the dreamweaver works and change it's abilities. She sits at her desk in her dark room and turns on the desktop light towards the blueprint covered in yarn and material. She begins working on it. At the end of the year, she goes to the rooftop of her home before dawn. She clenches her fist, and strikes a powerful glare towards the sunrise. She screams her wish to the sun. The sun beams a very thin line minimal thickness, piercing it's way through to Vaia's skull, surging Hugh's knowledge into her brain. She strains herself to maintain her consciousness as she collectes the information. The beam lasted for several seconds, once it had ended, Vaia stood back limp, looking at the sky, her entire body rattling. Within a couple seconds, she had fainted on her roof, soon to be taken to the ER as her father had found her asleep on the rooftop, her forehead with a dot in the center, dark with burns.

    Session Break
    Vaia wakes up in a room, connected to machines. It appears that she is in a hospital. She looks at the calendar from across the room. She soon realizes that is was March. She had also discovered that she had been in a coma for four to five months. Soon after realizing the time that she had been asleep, she begins to believe that the whole deal with The Sessions, dreamweavers, and everything was all just a dream. That every single person that she had met, were all just people created from memory, people that she's seen before and implanted into her dream that seemed to last for half a year. Soon her father entered the room, but was surprised as to see her awake. He sits next to her and wraps his hands around her right hand, telling her of how rough it has been for him as she was in a coma, and of how happy he is to know that his daughter had recovered from a coma, stating of how it must've been some miracle. He then told her that he found her on the roof, with a permanent mark of a burn on her forehead. Her eye's widened, terrified. Her father asks what was wrong. She only drops her head and squints her eyes as she looks down at her left palm.

    Year TWO


    <HUGH DAVIDSON>
    Creator and Host of The "Sessions" Event ; Inventor and Time Keeper of The Time Table
    YEAR ONE
    He was an innocent and bright young boy, who had the biggest ideas and could bring them to life using his creative ways, of which had not yet known would be his most tragic flaw. He had been designing different kinds of armour, and bracelets as he was fond of just creating which he enjoys creating. But then he had the greatest idea to make these kinds of armour and braces to actually take the form of someone if they had worn it. He tried it with armor first, of which was a success, as for the braces, it was a failure. He had created a most generic, and it took form of his personality, as planned. When he made another for his mother, it took form as the same thing, and ended up killing his mother on the inside. He watched in shock as his mother had coughed up blood from her mouth, but as the blood almost reaches the floor, time stops in the room. The brace she had worn had burst out from it's core and sucked in every mark of existence that his mother had made, besides Hugh's memories of her. He watched as it collects everything and soon dropping onto the floor next to the stove. He ran to his room, in fear of the brace that took his mother. Soon pondering on if his mother is actually alive and in the bracelet. He went back to the kitchen, to pick up and wear it. It looked excactly like his. He had awaited to be sucked into it, but nothing happens. He limps to his room and flops onto his bed, to drag his blanket over as he rolls to a caccoon. He sobs as he tries to hide his face from himself, soon falling asleep. He finds himself in front of light. He turns around, the rest being darkness, and appearing that he is in front of a gate, telling from the pillars. He walks forward into the light. As he walks onward, he can see a table. The table is designed in the style of clockwork. He notices a figure across the other side of the table. This being, an alien from outside this universe, covered in robes. He explains of a project, the Dynamic Universe Project. After explaining, the being held out it's hand towards Hugh, requesting to join the DUP to complete their project. As he had agreed on behalf of thinking that he can bring his mother back, the being blasts a beam into Hugh's forehead, implanting knowledge of the universe into his brain. This was in order for Hugh to pick up their work to finish it.
    He had awoken, feeling weird after this dream. he gets up, forgetting that had happened yesterday. He went to the bathroom to wash his face, then he sees a mark of a burn on his forehead. He rubs on it, it meant to him that he had just gotten a random scar. He went out of the bathroom to work on his project, but it is as he placed his hand on the bracelet to take it off, he had a flash of images go through his head, then he realizes that everything had happened. His face showing obvious signs of shock. Soon he snaps out of it, remembering that he has the ability to bring his mother back, and all he has to do is complete the DUP. As the days went by, he had begun to experience more dreams out of the ordinary, and set things in those dreams into proper order, actually controlling the outerREALITY. It was as he had studied the outerREALITY that he had completed the bracelets. As he had been transferring materials and technology from the outerREALITY, he had been using them to create the bracelets, soon to prioritize on the core of the braces. Soon, he had invented the first blueprint. He had made many copies of this blueprint as he needed spare backup references to these things, of which he had later named as "The Dreamweavers". He had given these prototypes to Hayato and Erisu, had had tested it out as beta testers. As they tested it out, they had suggested great ideas to enhance the performance. After finalizing the system of the dreamweavers, he had decided to create a game, known as "The Sessions". This game was to have participants play as he studied more of the outerREALITY, this was the way of being able to study that reality without putting himself into danger, and to gather more information required to complete the DUP. In the middle of the year, he had heard news of someone dying of spontaneous combustion, then noticing that it was of the Arakaya family. He had spent days wondering about Hayato and Erisu. That was until he had encountered Erisu at the cafeteria during lunch break. Erisu sat with Hugh, the table remained silent. Nobody talked and everyone in the cafeteria were to stare at Erisu being alone for once, but that wasn't the case, everyone knew what happened, and they can clearly see her pale face. Hugh just stares at his plate until he tries to apologize to her, but Erisu jerks herself upward to begin screaming at him. She starts shouting at him for not telling her that dying in a dream can actually kill someone in reality. People around the cafeteria were confused. Hugh just stood there, not knowing what to say, watching Erisu as she begins sobbing as she screams at Hugh with resentment, shouting about how he had killed her boyfriend. He could feel nothing but heartache. She soon stops shouting to take a deep breath before dropping down to lay her head down on the table as she wraps her arms around her head. He just looks down. his hair covering his face, thinking about how the bracelet he had invented had yet taken another life. He hears her sobbing throughout the rest of lunch break, everyone just staring at the two, not knowing what to do. When lunch break had ended, He hears Erisu getting up from the table to turn around to someone who's offering her to stay home for a little longer. He just sits there at the table in the empty cafeteria as the scene fades to black. It was as he had been reminded of the tragedy that had started it all, his mother being devoured by his braces. He then remembers why he had begun the true development of these inventions, it was to bring people back to life. He then began working much harder to complete the Dynamic Universe Project.

    A few days later, he was attending school, but in the courtyard as of the moment when a girl rushes towards him, grabbing his wrist and dragging him away from the building. The girl explained that the discussion mustn't be heard and that nobody may hear it. When they had arrived at an area behind the trees, Hugh questioned about what it was that she needed. He could see deep concern in her glaring eyes. She asks him if it was true that he had something to do with Hayato's death. He froze, guilty of association of his death. He was then questioned of what it was that he had to do with Hayato's death. He took a deep breath before speaking of the Sessions, an event of which they participated in at their own risk. He could only guess that Hayato had died within the dream and was taken from life. He was then asked of what this event known as 'Sessions' is. He gives her knowledge of what it is, presuming that she has good intentions. She had wished to join, but he first asked for her name. It was Vaia, he then notifies her that there is only one last blueprint left, but he willingly gave the blueprint to her, telling her to be prepared, that she is at her own risk. She states that she will take full responsibility and she grabs onto the blueprint as he had held it out to her. He tells her that the bell is going to ring soon and that he should get to running. It was as he had begun to rush off that Vaia latches onto his arm, interrupting him. He looked back at her, she tells him that Erisu may begin performing stupid acts, and that he may need to watch over her to make sure she doesn't start anything ridiculous. He nods as she lets go of his forearm, then rushing off to class. The next scene shows him in class, pondering of more ideas. It was as he had discovered how much range of area all the technology need to function, he came up with the idea. Using knowledge of his dreamweavers system and the newfound knowledge of the works required, he had come to the idea of using that decorational clockwork table as the core of the device, like the way the dreamweaver works. Using the table in the very center of a very large fortress, he makes use of the table as the dreamweaver core that will connect with the outerREALITY, thus plunging it's existence across the universe. The scene fades away. He was then in his room. It was as he had created modifications to the table, he had discovered that he can enter different levels of the outerREALITY. He uses this modification to bind it with a switch that transferred Hugh into a different area, an abandoned area, but very alive. He began working on the internal systems of the table, thus, inventing the "Time Table", the very successor of the Dynamic Universe Project. One afternoon, he had received a call from Erisu, he seemed relieved that she hadn't jumped off of a bridge, but she interrupts him, ordering him to meet her at the park to discuss things, she informs him that this is how she will be able to forgive him. He was willing to take the chance for forgiveness. Next clip shows him standing at the bench as Erisu approaches. He had begun to speak, but as he does, she slaps him straight across the face, shocking him. She stated that if he desired for forgiveness, he must remain calm and answer questions. They both stand at the bench, a long pause. Erisu breaks the silence. She states that Hugh knows pretty much everything, that means he should be able to answer just about any and every question she has for him. He nods, still uneasy about this confrontation. She asks him about ressurrection, and his eyes widened in shock. She questions if there was anything wrong. Hugh then nervously states about not really knowing anything about bringing the dead back to life, but he states that if she wishes on it, it might come true, but he informs Erisu that he isn't sure if it will work, as he had never encountered this kind of scenario. He wasn't sure if he was ready to tell Erisu about how his latest invention was going to bring back life, as he fears that Erisu might interfere with the production of the project. She was willing to give the attempt of wishing people back to life a go, so she dismisses Hugh, addressing him as forgiven. She then walks off. He then watches as she walks off. He looks back down, wondering if it was right to act that way upon Erisu. What will happen if it doesn't actually work? He then felt that he shouldn't worry about this, after all, he believes that he can turn time back if he were to be able to manipulate the universe. He then went back to working on the project. After Session ONE was finished, the Time Table was complete. He felt that he required a break after all the work he had to do. That was when he had received a call in the middle of the night from Erisu, telling him to meet up with her at the top of the hill at the park. He meets with Erisu at the hill in the still dark morning. He can see determination in her eyes.. He then comments that she's changed a whole lot since they had last seen each other, but then Erisu shuts him up. She then prepares to make the wish. When the sun had begun to rise, he watches as she clenches to her heart with absolute will, then shouting her wish out with all of her almighty spirit. Several moments pass and Hugh states that it is possible in every universe that none may be brought back to life. He felt distraught by saying this, but he mustn't tell anyone of the project. He watches as she stares off into the sunrise, her eyes tearing up as she drops to her knees and tilted back, gazing off into the sky, her eyes filled with despair. She screams her heart out, it echoes across town. Hugh just looks away from the heartaching scene. looking down, feeling helpless in everything.

    Session Break


    Year TWO


    <CHIHARU HAMAMOTO>
    Host and God of Current Universe
    Chiharu is seen only in some clips throughout the entire series, until the ending where she is replaced by Darwin into her position as host of the universe by default.
     
  2. StayFrosty

    StayFrosty Lynus was here! WAS.
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    You...what?
    And here I was thinking that my posts might be TL;DRed.
    I don't know where to begin, let alone what to say.

    The problem here is that you did not sufficiently explain about the character's backgrounds nor appearance so putting in such deep and vast contexts suddenly throws people off... that's my opinion at least; the characters were just mere names and labels on a screen rather than fleshed out people that one might associate with.

    In addition to this, this magical universe seems very....magical. Even after reading through the links, I am not 100% sure what I'm supposed to be reading.

    The main problem here is simply:
    TOO many People
    TOO many Organizations
    TOO many Languages
    TOO many Stories
    TOO many... EVERYTHING.

    Without any attempt to ease in the reader into this... universe...or multiverse.
    I love how you're trying to make a flourishing universe with everything there but... this is WAY too much.

    If I would pick an option on the poll above I would literally pick every single option at once. Seriously. This is how I'm feeling about this; both love and hate.

    Overkill... my friend. Seriously, overkill.
     
  3. Nicaryan-Knight

    Nicaryan-Knight Nykarcian

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    Yeahh.... I do have a problem with easing people into these stories as of yet. If I can tell you anything as of right now is that; when it comes to reading a title from the Tonyara stories, it's best to start from a fresh mind, forget about everything else you know of before you read of a and/or another title of the Tonyara story. Meaning, don't bear mind of the other stories as you read it. As for the characters and their appearances, I do get that the way I write things down actually sometimes refers to the subject by a piece of their appearance, hence the reason why some may be confused. I have yet to show off how show look like, especially as I had never really shown off their final designs.
    Also, if there aren't enough options, then I'll add another next time! "All of the above"