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Realm [Chapter 1] Unfinished ;c

Started by Aerocobe on Jan 01, 2017 9:05 PM • 4 replies • 1322 views
Aerocobe
Jan 01, 2017 • 9:05 PM • 3 likes
Heyy guys! i was working on this project with a friend, but i think he died, not sure where he went... I really wanted to finish this first chapter, but i kinda lost motivation for it ;/. Yeah, yeah i know, same ol' excuse, but tell me how you guys think about the animation. Cnc would be greatly appreciated!
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/9e53f1a0d5f387ecb8612c474d4ec4d2
[flash='width= 665 height= 205']http://puu.sh/h8VEh/8ff9114b6e.swf[/flash]
NobleJuice
Jan 01, 2017 • 11:53 PM
And you just look at her crying.
So insensetive.
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Bryant
Jan 02, 2017 • 1:08 AM • 1 likes
Did you quit because you couldn't find a girl voice actor or......? :D

Not really much to CNC. Voice acting could use a little more enthusiasm in some parts. Other than that, everything was solid.
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Aerocobe
Jan 02, 2017 • 1:12 AM
Did you quit because you couldn't find a girl voice actor or......? :D

Not really much to CNC. Voice acting could use a little more enthusiasm in some parts. Other than that, everything was solid.

Pshh.... no.... ;c. And also he's a downer, so his voice is kinda mono toned.
[flash='width= 665 height= 205']http://puu.sh/h8VEh/8ff9114b6e.swf[/flash]
Dally
Jan 02, 2017 • 3:52 AM • 1 likes
Pshh.... no.... ;c. And also he's a downer, so his voice is kinda mono toned.


Perhaps to show some of his "downer debby" personality are some small cynicisms in his dialog. It would also be nice for the map to be separated into background and foreground parts, and have some parallax in them. Other than that, I love the body movements here! :)
Here is my current spritesheet with basic poses & a short bio.
Click here for my OLD ordinary spritesheet

For Kiryu's click here
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