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Outskirts observatory

Started by Yegor141 on Feb 02, 2017 8:50 PM • 6 replies • 1944 views
Yegor141
Feb 02, 2017 • 8:50 PM • 4 likes
A simple map I made for my upcoming animation

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Last edited Feb 03, 2017 10:52 AM by Yegor141 (3 edits)
Lynus
Feb 02, 2017 • 10:24 PM • 1 likes
Apart from the repeated tiles, I would personally have maybe shrunken down some regular trees and placed them behind or in front the wall of trees for some extra foliage to mostly give it a more natural look rather than a manufactured one.
But otherwise, the map is very nice and really emphasises the lookout, which is really nice and well done.
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Big_Hands
Feb 03, 2017 • 4:49 AM • 2 likes
The blur's a bit overdone. The concept's real neat though, I like it.
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Yegor141
Feb 03, 2017 • 10:56 AM
Thanks for the feedback you 2!

@Lynus
The tiles can't be different from eachother because they would look super " :/ ".
In the latest update, I did add trees because I felt the map was TOO generic with those background trees.

@Ethan
It might be other done, but to my eye, It looks super clean.
I did tone it down a bit bit bit bit.


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Lynus
Feb 03, 2017 • 11:04 AM • 1 likes
Hey glad you updated it.
I'm not sure if you did this but I read some Goates' tut from ages ago that to replicate MS blur you have to blur it and then sharpen it a few times (not overkill though).
With that in mind, I feel the additional tree placement is wonky as fuck considering you can almost see the tree trunk or whatever it's called on the repeated tree tiles but the further and furthest trees are like reduced to just the tips and whatnot, maybe shrink them abit more and whatever and yeah.
I like the addition of the bridge, adds some more kinda like context to the thing, like the tower alone would be abit weird to view at solo.
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Dally
Feb 12, 2017 • 12:39 AM
Besides what everyone else said about the repeated tiles, overblurring of some background objects, it's a simple, yet visually effective map. Good stuff, Yegor!
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jose117
Feb 28, 2017 • 7:19 PM
wow looks awose make s fee then i want to go that observatory just my opinio maybe looks better in the night you know
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