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Another small test I did

Started by PulseRed on Mar 20, 2017 12:58 AM • 9 replies • 2463 views
PulseRed
Mar 20, 2017 • 12:58 AM • 1 likes
Sup , this is just another small test I did .
Some walking and a REALLY weak punch

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/328cfd29a7fb88c095f70709cd0ece86

Any feedback for this one ? im currently working on a full scene much more complete than this one .

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Maruo
Mar 21, 2017 • 1:53 AM
i cant open it
"SpriteSheet?"
PM me maru#4504
PulseRed
Mar 22, 2017 • 12:38 AM
you need flash to open it and you need to accept the site to use flash player to view the animation
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Shulkle
Mar 22, 2017 • 12:48 AM
http://maplemation.com/threads/the-dumpster-post-your-tests-and-super-short-anims-here.31217/ Thought I told you small tests go here.

Anyways, not much to say. The text is a bit too small and plain. You may want to just throw some filter on there, like a red glow with a white text color. The punch itself seems not exaggerated enough. The body is still and the other arm doesn't show any sign of the punching arm, so you may want to study that concept. It would compliment some stuff you're doing.
Maruo
Mar 22, 2017 • 4:51 AM
you need flash to open it and you need to accept the site to use flash player to view the animation


"this is what happen"
"SpriteSheet?"
PM me maru#4504
Shulkle
Mar 22, 2017 • 5:39 AM
"this is what happen"

http://www.fastswf.com/DxtSOnw :V If this doesn't work, then it's more of a problem on your end, and you may want to double check your Flash player.
Maruo
Mar 22, 2017 • 6:03 AM
http://www.fastswf.com/DxtSOnw :V If this doesn't work, then it's more of a problem on your end, and you may want to double check your Flash player.


now i can open it, thank you shulkle
"SpriteSheet?"
PM me maru#4504
PulseRed
Mar 26, 2017 • 7:04 PM
sorry , my fault
http://maplemation.com/threads/the-dumpster-post-your-tests-and-super-short-anims-here.31217/ Thought I told you small tests go here.

Anyways, not much to say. The text is a bit too small and plain. You may want to just throw some filter on there, like a red glow with a white text color. The punch itself seems not exaggerated enough. The body is still and the other arm doesn't show any sign of the punching arm, so you may want to study that concept. It would compliment some stuff you're doing.
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Jun3
Apr 12, 2017 • 2:45 AM
Was it a punch?
PulseRed
Apr 23, 2017 • 8:42 PM
Was it a punch?

yeah ... I tried to do it faster but ... yeah ;/
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