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Started by RafSimonsRickOwens on Mar 27, 2017 3:59 AM • 2 replies • 126 views
RafSimonsRickOwens
Mar 27, 2017 • 3:59 AM • 1 likes
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Shem

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Abilities:
MMA:
An experienced fighter, his inhuman abilities aren't his only blessing.
Master Spliffsman: Tales are told of the grimiest geezer who could take back a whole spliff in one puff.
Hard Lad: Though it is not known how, his vitality has been shown to improve the longer battles progress. Many rarely live to see this take place anyway.
Raze: A glare, or merely standing near is all it takes to erode the armour of the most battle-hardened warriors. That and the transplanted heart of a witch.
Skengman: Wit and will has turned this man into the main character of his own story, he'll find a way to win, the hero always does.
Narsty: Straight up fuckin dirts guy don't even bother fightin him


Story:
Always been the argumentative type, he'd finally pissed off the wrong person at a rave and got rushed outside the club, with a knife to the chest he was done. Lucky for him, a successful heart transplant from a woman who'd dabbled in the occult meant he'd obtained abilities giving him more than a head-start in future fights.




Last edited Mar 27, 2017 8:37 PM by RafSimonsRickOwens (1 edits)
Flicker Fall
Mar 27, 2017 • 4:02 PM
might want to add a bit of punctuation and a word or two to some parts so it's easier to read.
"(what I would suggest.)"

Though it is not known how(,) his vitality
progress, (though) many rarely live to see
merely standing near (him) is all it


Looks cool otherwise.(I'm not one to properly critique the finer details of this.)
MBR Profile: Naaahhhhh
MBR status: nope.

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RafSimonsRickOwens
Mar 27, 2017 • 8:41 PM
might want to add a bit of punctuation and a word or two to some parts so it's easier to read.
"(what I would suggest.)"

Though it is not known how(,) his vitality
progress, (though) many rarely live to see
merely standing near (him) is all it


Looks cool otherwise.(I'm not one to properly critique the finer details of this.)

Fixed, thanks for pointing it out.

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