Wolferian VS Hiyo

My Video:[MEDIA=youtube]dFP84_LZHk8[/MEDIA]
My note: I got in the zone! Autozone!.
MBR prof:http://maplemation.com/threads/wolferians-mbr-profile.32592/

Although this MBR is...eh... Someone's got to win right?

This kinda remind me of old fashion 2010 MBRS.
The theme is sky battle but both animations had, very little sky battle.

I'm not good at CnC so bare with me.
Wolf: You're fight was only 30 sec long, but I wouldn't call it much of a fight. You just knocked his character in the air and did attacks.
There wasn't much emotion in. Jab jab jab, troll, jab, knock down then 30 sec of memes.
uh, oh and the sounds were kinda weird, real quiet.
The combo was smooth but, eh

Hiyo:
"In nature only strong survive." It gave me flash backs.
I see you did that megaman power up thing, I like it.
Umm..
Action was, Okay....

Vote Lucario was more, amusing.
Just some advice though, take you're future battles more serious. We all get busy and lazy, it's understandable.
But if it happens to many times some people may not want to battle you in the long run.

Oohhh, yay! So much MBR happening today.

Okay, First off:
Wolfy: When you were doing some aerial attacks on that poor dude, I noticed that there are some zero emotions from some hits but overall it's pretty good. And I see you are doing some JoJo's Adventure meme going on, but please do not make it your entire half of your video. It makes it a meme instead of an MBR, sweetie. Your pacing is pretty good throughout the fight, and it made it seem like the fast paced battle that it should be. A negative, but I'm not going to hold you down on it, is that there wasn't any music but your SFX was enough to make up the lack of audio. It unfortunately let me down a bit by your disclaimer; it shouldn't be there. Tell em to fuck off; just not on your video for a MBR. You don't need to use a quarter of your video to tell them all that, hun. So it's best to do it in the video description in big text rather than take up a quarter of the video. It's an MBR and having it there was a little off-setting.

Hiyo: Pacing felt awkward for me at the beginning. Mainly because during your little warm up sequence (I like that) but, maybe it shouldn't be used if you're going to delay reaction of when Wolfy notice you're preparing your build up skill. Not only that, I feel like the "ROUND 1" and "ROUND 2" shouldn't be there since it should be just the aerial battle. Your last part felt... uh. How should I put it; Why are you doing an aerial battle on flying discs? You also cut off on round two, and I know it's suppose to be ten seconds and all but I just don't like the feeling of it getting cut off without a proper way; like are you winning at the end? I can't tell unfortunately, dearie. It ended so abruptly that I couldn't tell what had happened.
Also, that text color. I'm getting a really weird sense of deja vu here.

Overall feel:
Both of you two need to do better on your endings.
Hiyo, you should probably do something about that text because it's on the tip of my finger about how it was colored. Pacing needs to be fixed a little bit and also you need to grasp onto the battle theme more because I'm unsure if I could say you got the theme better.
Wolfy, Please do not let a meme be longer than your actual video or your own disclaimer towards people who can't stop. You were able to use the aerial battle theme pretty well, might have to tweak some parts, but overall it's cool.

My vote will go to Wolfy though.

EightQueens said: (post #331082)

Also, that text color. I'm getting a really weird sense of deja vu here

ikr.

Congrats on that W Discount Shulkle. I'll be giving you your MBR Point shortly.

Locking thread.