creating sprite poses

Tried to make my first pose motion meow~ X3
(didn't knew how to add the gif other ways so I just pasted the link lol)
http://princess-shi.deviantart.com/art/running-desu-674287561

:V Told ya about using Imgur or ShareX, but I guess I forgot to mention you click the picture icon, paste the link, and then leave it as it.
Something that really bothers me is the stray white pixels and the rest of the body looking too still. Even other arm being very still as you run. A single frame of having the hand move isn't enough. The alignment of the running doesn't seem right to me either. The alignment line is the bottom-most pixel of the sequence.

You may want to align at least the 2 poses where you do touch the ground.
Something about the arm makes it seem like it's not attached to the body either. Maybe make it closer to the body.
Well, those are my thoughts about it. Here's hoping to see more! Do check about the errors though.

That's a nice try, definitely better than anything I can do. Adding on to what Shulkle said early on in his post, I'd suggest you make the torso move a bit. Right now it looks more like the legs are running separate from the body, given that the body doesn't show any effects of running.

Also jesus christ your signature is scary

Shulkle said: (post #331203)

:V Told ya about using Imgur or ShareX, but I guess I forgot to mention you click the picture icon, paste the link, and then leave it as it.
Something that really bothers me is the stray white pixels and the rest of the body looking too still. Even other arm being very still as you run. A single frame of having the hand move isn't enough. The alignment of the running doesn't seem right to me either. The alignment line is the bottom-most pixel of the sequence.

You may want to align at least the 2 poses where you do touch the ground.
Something about the arm makes it seem like it's not attached to the body either. Maybe make it closer to the body.
Well, those are my thoughts about it. Here's hoping to see more! Do check about the errors though.

I had already uploaded it when you said about the imgur tbh ;w; will try it next time~
and yeah guess you are right about those lol tried to make them without template so didn't expect it to be perfect XD will try to fix it though, thanks for telling meh~

SuperKimxD said: (post #331220)

That's a nice try, definitely better than anything I can do. Adding on to what Shulkle said early on in his post, I'd suggest you make the torso move a bit. Right now it looks more like the legs are running separate from the body, given that the body doesn't show any effects of running.

Also jesus christ your signature is scary

yup got a point in that, will fix it meow~

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