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MBR: KingIke75 vs DylanAnimations [cancelled]

Started by KingIke75 on May 13, 2017 6:29 PM • 7 replies • 1843 views
KingIke75
May 13, 2017 • 6:29 PM
My MBR due date is today and my opponent decided to quit :/ So here is what I got.
Here was the theme and stuff he challenged me with:
"Let's mbr dude
theme: none maple free style
max time: 20-50 sec
due date: 10 days"
[MEDIA=youtube]zF5cxNEi-So[/MEDIA]
[flash= width = xxx height = xxx]https://my.mixtape.moe/yufipl.swf[/flash]
Last edited May 13, 2017 6:44 PM by KingIke75 (1 edits)
Flicker Fall
May 13, 2017 • 6:37 PM
Looks good, though I'm kinda wondering what the theme of this mbr was.
MBR Profile: Naaahhhhh
MBR status: nope.

(- w-) 9
KingIke75
May 13, 2017 • 6:45 PM • 1 likes
Looks good, though I'm kinda wondering what the theme of this mbr was.

Just updated it!
[flash= width = xxx height = xxx]https://my.mixtape.moe/yufipl.swf[/flash]
BioRhythmic
May 13, 2017 • 6:51 PM • 3 likes
'Twas enjoyable. Although the trail effect at 0:25 was poorly executed, and it ended with smoke that looked like it was drawn by a toddler. Everything else was decent. Too bad you couldn't finish it.
Neil
May 13, 2017 • 7:22 PM
Spoiler
-Why is the camera so zoomed in throughout the entire animation?
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-...Why did you bother with this? What exactly were you trying to do? The camera was so zoomed in so nobody could see his legs, hell, they could barely see his hand when he pointed at IronMan.

-Also, what's with the jerky arm movement in the beginning? Did you just forget to add easing to it or something? I don't really want to repeat what I just said, but people won't be able to catch Captain America pointing since the camera is so zoomed in.

-0:19 completely killed whatever flow there was with that 3s of useless text and wouldn't IronMan be able to react fast enough to dodge Captain Americas attack? It wasn't super fast or anything, so why didn't he just move out of the way?

-With the perspective shot, I couldn't really tell what happened the first time I watched this and after 2 other times, I finally noticed that IronMan was hit with that shield. But...why didn't you do anything else with that? It seemed like a waste if you ask me, you could have done so much more with Captain America's shield yet it didn't even show up after that.

-That ending...ugh.


Didn't really comment on everything, but I'm sure this is enough for me to say, "You don't deserve the point in my eyes."
"Judgment time demands order and quiet."
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Kayas
May 13, 2017 • 8:03 PM
Took me a bit but I had to vote for no. It felt a lot more disappointing for reasons mentioned above. It's a shame you didn't get the fight you were going in for. Good luck on your next one man!
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Neil
May 16, 2017 • 4:24 AM • 1 likes
I will update your profile soon.
Oh and please leave a link to your profile next time you MBR somebody.
"Judgment time demands order and quiet."
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