Weapon Holder S1E1 - A New Adventure
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Canox
on Aug 30, 2017 9:12 AM •
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iSmokeToast
Aug 30, 2017 • 7:31 PM
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lol i like this a lot
:melon:eye cloud bread
WuYue
Aug 31, 2017 • 5:21 AM
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that mouth.so cute:iloveyou: i like it!
Shulkle
Sep 07, 2017 • 5:47 AM
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Better now than never, I guess.
So as a whole, I really liked how you took the advice of not drawing the backgrounds and tiles. Audio levels are more consistent. The plot actually seems pretty interesting. I genuinely enjoyed this guy's chat about being a warrior and striving to become better. It was heartwarming. I did chuckle a bit on some of the jokes made here.
Just some thoughts about what you did, at 0:21, it was charming seeing that kind of item dropping joke happen, though as a nice detail, maybe making it levitate up and down like it does in Maplestory could have been cool to look at.
"Really bad way of skewing and transitioning"
You skewed this guy from the head instead of the feet and resized him only a single frame into his getting up pose. I found this to be very awkward to look at, especially since you skewed Titan much more smoothly and even aligned him fine when getting up. Double check your skews and alignments for everyone. What you did with Titan is a good example of how to transition getting up/falling down.
"Aligning would be nice"
A guide layer with an alignment would be great. It's unaligned in other places more than just here but thought this shot most depicts it.
"This guy got 2 mouths"
Either cut the black part underneath him or the mouth that's stuck there with that pain face. At glance, I thought it was the f3 mouth, but the gap bugged me a bit whenever he did that.
At 1:28, why'd the background stop showing a city? Maybe try having a silhouette of it? I just feel mixed about it disappearing and becoming this blue sky,
"I think I'm the only guy who'd notice something as mundane as this"
This guy's face moves a little bit every blink. I kind of think having that blink2 would help this be smoother, but maybe this was intentional.
"I personally think this was too far of a tween"
Maybe make him sit closer to the fire so it wouldn't look like he just flew towards it lol.
Otherwise, yeah I liked this as a whole. Just the very little details I guess. Good job!
iSmokeToast
Sep 07, 2017 • 6:40 PM
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"I personally think this was too far of a tween"
Maybe make him sit closer to the fire so it wouldn't look like he just flew towards it lol.
if it's what he intended to do, i think the weird physics makes the scene funnier
:melon:eye cloud bread
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