My first sprite

So... This is my first post. I just want people to help me out with judging with this weapon. The first sprite was made by my friend, while the second one was made by me. I tried my best though.


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https://terenceyapp.deviantart.com/art/Picture-1-749092654 )




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I tried to make a side view of the first sprite, I hope I did good.

For future reference on showing images, use this as means to showing an image from dA, or any image actually. Anyways, the 1st sprite looks clean. The side view isn’t bad, but could be better. The handle of the sword looks higher than what is presented from the 1st sprite. Based on the front view, I think there should be a black band of sorts on the side view as well on the top of the handle(?)
Otherwise, it’s not bad at all for a first sprite. Keep it up.

Shulkle said: (post #336781)

For future reference on showing images, use this as means to showing an image from dA, or any image actually. Anyways, the 1st sprite looks clean. The side view isn’t bad, but could be better. The handle of the sword looks higher than what is presented from the 1st sprite. Based on the front view, I think there should be a black band of sorts on the side view as well on the top of the handle(?)
Otherwise, it’s not bad at all for a first sprite. Keep it up.

Thank you so much for judging my sprite! I'll try my best to improve.
And also thank you for teaching me how show the image from the dA.

Blacksmith said: (post #336782)

First sprite

Basic outline but actually very well done as a First try

But watch out for thst crystal shine, its sporadic but specifically done and therr is room for improvement, just can't quite figure out where tho.

Other then that, good job

Thank you so much for judging my sprite! I'll try my best to improve.

terenceyapp said: (post #336778)

So... This is my first post. I just want people to help me out with judging with this weapon. The first sprite was made by my friend, while the second one was made by me. I tried my best though.


(If image doesn't show, use this link:
https://terenceyapp.deviantart.com/art/Picture-1-749092654 )




(If image doesn't show, use this link:
https://terenceyapp.deviantart.com/art/Picture-2-749092705?ga_submit_new=10:1528639908 )

I tried to make a side view of the first sprite, I hope I did good.

Okay, So I tried to edit it like how Shulkle said it should be, I made the handle shorter with a black band (that I don't think looks like a black band).



And 1 more thing, just to make sure, if I edited this sprite, do I post a new thread in the "Edited Sprites" section, reply it in the same thread or make a new thread?