Animation VOD Fix-em-Ups

In record time! @Alpha
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https://www.mediafire.com/file/3o6z41hdxwfzm9w/MBR_VS_Nineb.zip/file
To be honest, I don't like this animation (I think it was rush and my animation style was pretty basic). I don't precisely know what's wrong with it, so I'd like a normal cnc :]

AT Edit:
talked in dm's, too short for a vod review so cnc was given instead.

@Joshua
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Actually finished this in January and let it sit for a while. Didn't know if I should ask because you guys already helped out a lot on discord when I started this as a test but I might as well try and see what happens.
Animation: [MEDIA=youtube]kcGFUNBwJ1Q[/MEDIA]

And the .fla file: https://www.mediafire.com/file/crw7hif7wfgbbxn/Family_Affair.fla/file
I apologise in advance for both the mess and the very evident frustration that's shown in the .fla, flash didn't cooperate a few times so I ended up with a number of duplicate symbols/bitmaps and naming things stupidly and angrily helped me stay sane.

Like I said earlier, this was mainly a camming test but now I'm wondering how I can make the dialogue scenes a bit more interesting. But anything to get better helps a lot so whether this gets accepted or not I'll take any advice you have.

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I'll give it a shot
hopefully I can learn from this instead of trial and error through practice animations
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Fla: http://www.mediafire.com/file/km802kxw3t2ky4v/DEFAULT_FLA_-_ADVANCED.fla/file
Please could you give me some tips for camming as well I would like to improve it
I would also like to know how to make my style more unique because I am kind of at a block when knowing what to do to make my style different from everyone else
Specific AT Member: I don't really have one as long I can gain some knowledge it is of no concern
I would also prefer to just have a pre-recorded video detailing my faults since my parents and sisters are always in so it make it awkward to talk cause they come in all the time.

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@BlackMegaman

Animation:[MEDIA=youtube]IP1UcBfLfok[/MEDIA]
FLA: https://www.mediafire.com/file/lz6oc6jb9yxc3ib/SWC2020_-_UntitledOmega.fla/file
(really unorganized sorry lmao)
Kinda just wanna see whats touched on tbh since I'm at sort of a roadblock where idk where to go from with my animations, any nitpicking or critique would be a real help!
I would also kinda prefer a pre-recorded video, but if not that's cool I'm free just whenever.

AT EDIT:
Sorted in Dm's.

Neil said: (post #341029)

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@BlackMegaman

This helps me how to do alots of things of animation, Thank you Neil.

Animation: [MEDIA=youtube]4zq_fUKOdUw[/MEDIA]
http://www.mediafire.com/file/diiz1awh9662fr0/smashWall_2020.fla/file
can I get some cnc on this vod or not. I just want to know how I cant improve my combos and some other things.

Alex303 said: (post #341380)

Animation: [MEDIA=youtube]4zq_fUKOdUw[/MEDIA]
http://www.mediafire.com/file/diiz1awh9662fr0/smashWall_2020.fla/file
can I get some cnc on this vod or not. I just want to know how I cant improve my combos and some other things.

We can't exactly make a VOD on this since really the only issue with your animation here is that the pauses between combos (0:10, for example, breaks the flow that you had going) and so long as you get rid of stuff like that, you'll be good since your combos are actually pretty nice!

To everybody else, we're trying to focus on finishing the tutorials and will need to stop taking VODs temporarily. We'll open back up once they're finished!

Hello! I read the first post/page, and just the first page, and I have not read the latter posts, and would like a Vod Review!
Video: [MEDIA=youtube]I4qLVxi3ZdA[/MEDIA]
Fla: Find it yourself

This is a finished animation, with plenty of combat and depth, and I think it can be talked about in at least a 3-minute review! I would like to discuss different timelines where I could have done different or alternative options to make this animation look better. Possibly different things I could have done to further improve it or add more flair to it. I was wondering if I could also have some criticism on how to make the mobs animate better and make them look gooder. Furthermore, I was also wondering if I could animate more like you. I think you are super cool at animating the maple characters and admist this wall of text, I would like to thank you all for all the hard work that you have been putting into for creating all these vod reviews and helping everybody with their own individual animations.

@Shulkle

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