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MBR Prozak VS Blez

Started by Blez on Sep 29, 2018 11:18 AM • 6 replies • 2077 views
Blez
Sep 29, 2018 • 11:18 AM • 8 likes
MBR -
Theme: Freestyle
Time Limit: Minimum 15 seconds
Deadline: September 21st, 2018 (3 weeks after accepting) + extension 1 week to 28 sep
Restrictions: None

Prozak
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Profile : http://maplemation.com/threads/isaacs-mbr-profile.30081/
Notes : -
Animation : [MEDIA=youtube]YH9KB4sxpTQ[/MEDIA]

Blez
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Profile : http://maplemation.com/threads/blez-mbr-profile.30031/
Notes : meh.. no more speedlines HAHAHhaaa. My main focus is mostly choreography. figured that my ideas are lacking too. especially with weird vcaming and sounds
Animation : [MEDIA=youtube]7tCt9XDhBPE[/MEDIA]

CNC/Opinions are always open for both of us. I'd like to know why do you vote Blez or Prozak.
MBR profile
Status : Alive and depends
Last edited Sep 29, 2018 11:37 AM by Blez (2 edits)
PsychoJolteon2
Sep 29, 2018 • 12:13 PM • 3 likes
Man y'all should learn to use some damn camera shakes lmao.

Im voting for Blez on this one, the fight looks a lil more appaeling to me idk.

EVEN THO BOTH ARE RUSHED ENDINGS
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Taki
Sep 29, 2018 • 3:12 PM • 4 likes
I vote for blez because she used my guns c:
just kidding.

I didn't like the overall mood prozak created, it was hard to watch. Her boyfriend gets beheaded in front of her and her immediate reaction is to fight, no shock, no worries that she is facing an invisible enemy, it's as if she was waiting for someone to kill her bf already just so she can fight. The music was unfitting too and pacing was sloppy.
There is also the issue that you started by trying to make a reason for conflict, but then all these random characters appear from nowhere for no reason.

Blez also has room for improvement on some parts, but her animation was overall better thought out and consistent. The part where she nodded to her friend to shoot bothered me, her friend could tag along on her own and shoot while the other dude is open and while the other chick is defending and not while the dude has his defense up. I know it's hard to pull off having a third party join the action without breaking the pace, but that's something i want to see more in animations and i'm glad i've seen attempts from both of you.
Neil
Oct 02, 2018 • 12:12 AM
Congrats on your win Blez.
I'll update your profiles soon.
"Judgment time demands order and quiet."
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