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Lake Lonely

Started by NishikiKoi on Jan 14, 2019 12:06 AM • 1 replies • 1364 views
NishikiKoi
Jan 14, 2019 • 12:06 AM • 7 likes
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This is my first take at a 'map'. If you have any feedback on how I could have made this look better. I would more than appreciate it. I'll be making these pretty often.

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User imageUser image Didn't take into consideration how planets are really aligned and which one went where. Just went with whatever I thought flowed well. Any feedback on this would be nice as well!
Dally
Jan 14, 2019 • 12:32 AM • 3 likes
Very nice work on the rippling water, although I believe there should be a focus point on the map, like maybe the boat, unless the stars are the focus as it seems to be the only one that's the least blurry.

There also seems to be a cut away of the ripples on the left as well. :(
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Although I like the palm trees in front, I personally think there should be some bushes with it as well, to frame it more of a hidden view to a lonely place.
Here is my current spritesheet with basic poses & a short bio.
Click here for my OLD ordinary spritesheet

For Kiryu's click here
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Credits to King for signature~

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