Maplemation

Jun 30, 2019 • 10:54 PM • 3 likes

I'll update the story weekly so don't worry <3
My first ever comic series and story so I'll only improve on my story telling!
Incase the links mess up:

Volume Cover:
"Volume Cover 1"

Volume Page Cover: https://imgur.com/a/NFbQatf
Prologue Page 1: https://imgur.com/a/vLAfR4c
Page 2: https://imgur.com/a/LpyY7CY
Page 3: https://imgur.com/a/xMSf9ck

(The Prologue was rushed and quick to the point on purpose btw!)

"Prologue"

The story of Ajah and his Fiancee Anne on their journey to become great warriors!

CNC IS WELCOME! BE CRUEL HURT MY FEELINGS!
WEEKLY CHAPTER UPDATES SO IF YOU LIKE THE SERIES THE WAIT WON'T BE LONG!

Future American Comic Artist ;)
(Series On the Way!)

Dally

Jul 12, 2019 • 7:45 PM • 1 likes

Outside of a few spelling errors like "convenient" & "Now you know", it's a fairly decent prologue for the story! However, I'm not quite clear on the personal motivation of Ajah & Anne. They seem to desire becoming Sword Saints in their temple, hopefully you'll be able to elaborate on why the two want to be Sword Saints in a more personal reason, like maybe they want to protect their town after the death of a loved one or because they want to impress each other. Good luck on the rest of your story mate!

Here is my current spritesheet with basic poses & a short bio.
Click here for my OLD ordinary spritesheet

For Kiryu's click here

Spoiler

Credits to King for signature~

Ajah no Kensai

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