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Started by RedTimez_M on Jul 08, 2019 1:47 AM • 2 replies • 1334 views
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RedTimez_M
Jul 08, 2019 • 1:47 AM • 3 likes
Alright.
Here's the 411 Folks...


CIVIL WAR | TEAM NEIL
Bronze | 38
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This Dudes Name Is: Kanel


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He's a cocky Undertale dude. You'll love 'em.

Take a look at his powers and shiz

- Gaster Blasters are elemental.
Fire, Ice, and Lightning. Yeh they still shoot lasers

- Has some psychic ability that forces his opponets in a direction by his command.

- This guy can fight with his hands and legs bruh. But um... apparently he sucks at dodging.

Here are my demos:
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Hitlist: Nineb, Azurector, Sungod, Mespaint, Alpha

Battle Record:
MBR vs Alpha (Loss -22 | 60>38)

Availability: Well, when I'm available. You know what I mean lol.
Last edited Dec 26, 2019 10:17 PM by Kayas (5 edits)
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Azurector
Jul 08, 2019 • 9:47 AM
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Warren
Jul 13, 2019 • 11:40 PM
That first animation didn't really give me a whole lot to go off of so I'll mostly be referring to the animations after that one for my ranking.

  • You don't have good presentation. You use the lasso tool to cut things up and your tiles are unfinished. You could fix this by just masking a texture inside of the things you cut so it looks less cheap and it adds more life to your animations. As for the tiles, either have your camera not show the unfinished parts of the map or just finish the map.
  • The characters just slide all across the ground. The ground has friction. Your characters should either walk, run or do something that involves picking their feet up to move from one place to another. There's a lot of just sliding the characters you're animating around in the second animation.
  • Lots of negative space for camera work. You could easily fix this by just zooming in the camera and being more intimate. Have a focus.

Silver | 60
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"I said my sword was a tool of justice. Not used in anger...not used for vengeance. Now...I'm not so sure. Besides, this isn't my sword."

Discord: CARNIVAL#0713


"SOCIETY"

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