Art MBR: Dally vs Hunter

Started by Dally on Jan 26, 2020 3:45 AM • 1 replies • 1381 views

Jan 26, 2020 • 3:45 AM • 5 likes

Core Theme: Character Development
Sub Theme: Daily Life/ Routines
Due Date: January 18th (Extended to January 25th)
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DALLY
Rank : [B] GOLD | 120
Profile: http://maplemation.com/threads/dallys-art-mbr-profile.36012/

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Description: Hayln spends her long nights in her employer's forge making ends meet through her blacksmith expertise she once sought as a citizen of Nayon City, who have since abandoned her during her military dutyfighting for their cause.

Notes: Have always wanted to try out a small artpiece of one of my characters in the city of Maplemation trying to get by. Unfotunately Hunter wasn't able to finish in time, but I still enjoyed the process of lighting and solitude for my new character. uwu

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[B]HUNTER
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[B]GOLD | 120[/B]
Unfortunately Hunter did not finish in time, but he at least have some sketches of his concepts for the MBR of what it could've been: https://imgur.com/a/by3CfCj
Profile : http://maplemation.com/threads/hunter-art-profile.35793/
Notes: This MBR really opened my eyes that I'm not good with the overall composition and planning with the backgrounds. I have to study more into the process of making background and understanding the importance of what makes the piece interesting (even with my previous mbr). Was hoping the art trade earlier would help me figure something out, didn't work out lul. Anyways, I'm severely disappointed at myself by this fact but I'll challenge again once I'm more comfortable with similar themes! Thanks for the MBR and keep improving on Dally, I'll get ya next time![/B][/B]

Here is my current spritesheet with basic poses & a short bio.
Click here for my OLD ordinary spritesheet

For Kiryu's click here

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Credits to King for signature~

Last edited Jan 26, 2020 2:17 PM by Dally (1 edits)

Kaneko

Jan 28, 2020 • 5:02 AM • 3 likes

Heeyy! Goodwork you both! it is unfortunate for hunter to not finish his art tho :( i assume life has caught you ded so i still can understand!

I saw Hunter's sketches of composition and i do like some of the composition that you came up with!
And Daaally! Great job for finishing the art! and now i'd like to throw in some cnc for ya if ya dont mind! :d

"CnC! with alot of images xd"

For the back of the head, i feel like you made it too big, so try to make it smaller! i drew a skeleton guide of how i usually draw heads.
for start, i make a circle, and then direction lines ( direction of eyes, and nose ), aand theen jaw shape!
i also edited your drawing with my skeleton guide, i shifted up the mouth upward a little bit, move the right eyes to the right a little, to give space between the eyes!

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Try to make the arm part that i circled with green marker bigger! because it feels like her arm is too big and her wrist is too small

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and for the yellom circles, i noticed there are some coloring that came out from the line art, so try to clean those up for a better and cleaner result!
cleaner lines also help for a cleaner result. I saw some inconsistent lines in your drawing ( cut off in the middle of the way, inconsistent of size/pressure ) so try to clean those up too!

I hope you can accept these cnc and if you have further questions about these cnc you can contact me thru discord dm! i'd gladly help you out~

And for this MBR, my vote goes to Dally! Congratulations!

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