Song named after my favorite Tokyo Ghoul: Re chapter. This is about acceptance and stuff, hope you enjoy! https://soundcloud.com/royalakko/lazy-dearth-76
I like the arrangement of this, but the bassdrum and the kick feels like it's overpowering the higher frequencies to a point where your vocals and main melody feels washed out. if you can, try boosting the mid and alittle bit of the high freq on the piano melody, and then compress it to where the decibels are not over 0db. and maybe turn down the bassdrum and kick by alittle bit. Though the song sounds plain (but that's my opinion of doing things) it sounds great.
Thank you for your critique, but sadly I cannot fix those issues, since I haven't made the instrumental, as stated in the title of the links. I have only done the vocal performance & mixing on said vocals.
