First Maple Animation

Discussion in 'Animations' started by Jaycence, Jun 14, 2017.

  1. Jaycence

    Jaycence Newbie

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    So I know I said I started animating about a month ago but what I meant was that I just dicked around with sprites and effects ya know? Anyway, heres my FIRST published animation.. >.< Im sorry its bad and its kinda rushed i didnt really know how to end it >.<
    P.S Sorry Shulkle, I lied, im "not bad" at animating, im "not good at all" at animating xD

    ...I need help with subtitles lol
    EDIT:
    I didnt know how to edit Mali entering the scene ;-;
    Also the only part i was proud is that when I made Derek leave with that blur >.>
     
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  2. ThomasTheNinja

    ThomasTheNinja Alias: SpeedyAce

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  3. Ainn

    Ainn ↻ Veteran Sprite Animator
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    Yeah, it does look pretty rushed. But the real question is... was it Maple Rush'd????
     
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  4. Jaycence

    Jaycence Newbie

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  5. Shulkle

    Shulkle Remembered as the worst fight animator

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    ....Eh. Better than my first anim.
    Double check your layers and play with filters a little. You got some miss-aligned facial expressions and your effect use in the ending looked really bad. Maybe try to have a filter of sorts on your text too, because it real
    ly didn't look great. Otherwise, I liked the intro, it was charming and something I don't see too often, or when I do see it, it was hard to watch without questioning life.
     
  6. Runique 目隠し

    Runique 目隠し Uncrowned Bored man

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    Very Nice !
    Congratz !
     
  7. ZcyTHe

    ZcyTHe Newbie

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    That looks really good, and for a first animation the fighting seems very smooth!
    Although if it were me i would use resizing each time the characters switch emotions, just to make the characters less static.