FIrst video!

Discussion in 'Animations' started by Bio sans, May 17, 2019 at 12:39 AM.

  1. Bio sans

    Bio sans Newbie

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    hey! I finally got to making my own video!



    Wish me luck in the future!
     
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    Good luck!

    What did you use to animate this? If you're using Flash, Spritefan2's tutorials would be a good start to learning how to animate.
     
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    For a first animation, this looks pretty good! I remember back when I first started, I had the same quality - oh the memories..

    A word for improvement; I'd recommend aligning your stand pose from the bottom;

    Take these two frames for instance.

    upload_2019-5-17_12-27-14.png upload_2019-5-17_12-27-25.png

    To make them align perfectly; line up your sprites from the bottom where the shoes are placed. That way you don't get that 'jittery' effect your characters have.
    upload_2019-5-17_12-30-1.png

    It was probably shoddily explained, but I really hope it helps!
    I look forward to seeing you improve in the future!
     
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    thanks so much miles! I appreciate any criticism that I can get! because ill put it all to good use and make my videos better!

    im using adobe animate. I find it easier because I can use onion skin to see what I did before. plus I did watch all of spritefan2's tutorials, which was how I figured out most of the basics of making a video.
    thanks for the help!
     
    #4 Bio sans, May 17, 2019 at 2:52 PM
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