WIP/Fight scene in the works/I'M A MAGICAL GIRL NOW/Who should even win this crappy fight/I'm sorry this is gonna be so bad/I couldn't pick one title so here have fifty This should probably be posted in the dumpster, but it is a minute long, and I needed the poll option, so here it is. CnC is welcome, but I'd suggest you follow this! :D Shulkle said I should try a fight scene, and most MBRs are fight scenes, and what's wrong with branching out? So here this goes. But fair warning that it'll probably be awful. And I'm not even sure who should win this attempted fight scene, so you guys can decide that. To save you some time, here's some problems I'm already aware of (Though do tell me if you think some of these aren't actually problems. Some of them have been pointed out to me, but others are just hunches on my part): There's a bunch of weird, awkward stuff in the transformation sequence. The silhouette part, especially, is abrupt and is the only part of its kind within that sequence, so it seems weird and maybe out of place. Also, the eyes when throwing the soul gem are weird. The transition between songs is weird af. I'm no audio engineer :c... Not sure if I can improve it much more. The soul gem is thrown upwards before my hand should logically release it. But I can't find where exactly the problem lies with this. I wish the SUPER MAGICAL CHANGE OF SETTING had more impact. Any ideas as to how to emphasize that? Or suggestions for a better transition. Right now it's just a fade with some grayscale in between.