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Discussion in 'Sprites' started by Tokiochan, Aug 12, 2017.

  1. Tokiochan

    Tokiochan Membah'

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    I tried my best :v
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    #1 Tokiochan, Aug 12, 2017
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  2. Runique 目隠し

    Runique 目隠し French MapleAnimator

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    is good really good template
     
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  3. Ainn

    Ainn "It's time to JUMP up super high!"
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    That looks cool! That one arm is a little big, but the pose itself is very dynamic and very interesting to look at! Good job, and great choice.
     
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  4. Runique 目隠し

    Runique 目隠し French MapleAnimator

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    Approved by Ainn !
     
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  5. Tokiochan

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    Lmao i didn't notice till you said that

    xD thanks for the kind wordtho
     
  6. Taki

    Taki I am a underaged
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    Some proportion issues, like the forearm being much longer than the upper arm. Also i would make the fist and hand bigger to emphasize the pose, maple sprites have a messed rule about hand sizes, so you are free to make them bigger or smaller when you need it.
    Another issue s the way you positioned the limbs, like the left elbow should be closer to the body below the shoulder. The back leg should have a more bent knee while the front one is stretched. The torso should be rotated more towards us and tilted more to the front. The arm holding the sword should make a 90 degree angle.
    Yeah, that's pretty much it.
     
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