Animation UntitledOmega MBR Profile

Discussion in 'MBR Profiles' started by UntitledOmega, Feb 28, 2019.

  1. UntitledOmega

    UntitledOmega Some Tired EdgeLord.

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    Animation Rank:
    Silver | 79
    Name: UntitledOmega
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    Silver | 79
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    Character Biographies: N/A
    Hitlist: Sungod, Trystin, ScarfKanye, Joshua, Alex303, PizzaGuy.
    Availability: Come catch these hands


    Season Record (Season 1): N/A
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    #1 UntitledOmega, Feb 28, 2019
    Last edited: Jul 17, 2019
  2. Warren

    Warren Survive
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    The AT talked about some stuff and came to this conclusion: You have good ideas that are held back by a lot of bad fundamentals. You generally try to do a lot of cool things without providing enough visual information to create a coherent sequence of events so people can understand what you are trying to show in your animations. In addition to this, you are generally inconsistent with showing characters in space in your animations. Your backgrounds need more detail too.

    Anyway, your score is 79, you're a silver.
    Keep going you beautiful fucking edgelord. [​IMG]



    also, @Pizzaman432 made an edit to one of your other videos to help you do better pacing because sometimes your shots drag on for too long.

    p.s. please be more consistent with the blood that runs down your character's face, it keeps disappearing and reappearing all the time
     
    #2 Warren , Feb 28, 2019
    Last edited by a moderator: Mar 16, 2019