Yo whats good y'all its SoraStar here and I want you guys to roa- I mean CnC my Combo I made for a little collab me and my friends made, Links are below
My video:
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Full:Collab:
[MEDIA=youtube]trnOdrrLPtc[/MEDIA]
Anyway thx for reading,
SoraStar Signing out!
Hey guys check this out please and roast away!!!
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SoraStar
on Mar 12, 2017 5:50 AM •
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SoraStar
Mar 12, 2017 • 5:50 AM
SoraStar
Mar 12, 2017 • 6:38 AM
Right off the bat, the guy (who I happen not to recognize) didn't even move while the chick (who I also don't recognize) just ran directly into him and attacked head-on. I thought that was really fishy... He didn't block, walk away, flinch, move or even react until he was hit... The voice clips all conflicted with the sounds (meaning I typically couldn't hear what anyone said). The other issue is that the guy didn't even get a hit in. There was no struggle or sense of who is losing or winning, it just felt like more of a senseless bash. The entire fight seemed unprovoked, a little pointless and completely random. The dialogue (which could've explained at least a LITTLE bit) didn't bring anything to the table either.
Thx for your feedback! I wanted to just showcase a combo on the character if the guy character were to hit back it would have ruined the combo a bit(making sense of the "dummy" pun), but I do understand where your coming from with the character not blocking at all. I think you are right ain and I believe the combo would be more entertaining if i added more life to the guy being pummeled.
jose117
Mar 12, 2017 • 5:44 PM
nice i like the combo but maybe you can add more camera shake because in the ending the less o none camera shake olso i like the map looks great good job
[flash= width = 640 height = 205]https://my.mixtape.moe/wzytrt.swf[/flash]

RAGNA THE BLOODEDGE




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DELSIN
"favorite characters good and evil"

RAGNA THE BLOODEDGE




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SoraStar
Mar 12, 2017 • 8:41 PM
nice i like the combo but maybe you can add more camera shake because in the ending the less o none camera shake olso i like the map looks great good job
Oh ok, most definitely! Thx for the feed back!
jose117
Mar 12, 2017 • 9:22 PM
Oh ok, most definitely! Thx for the feed back!
your welcome
[flash= width = 640 height = 205]https://my.mixtape.moe/wzytrt.swf[/flash]

RAGNA THE BLOODEDGE




RUBY ROSE
LARS ALEXANDERSSON

HYDE
COLE

DELSIN
"favorite characters good and evil"

RAGNA THE BLOODEDGE




RUBY ROSE
LARS ALEXANDERSSON

HYDE
COLE

DELSIN

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